All i can say is "wow". At first I thought that your story was a bit too crude and dark for my liking, but once I started to get in the flow of things, it has since become my favorite HP fanfic since the Draco Trilogy and "Harry Potter and the Turmoil Within".

The characters are so deliciously twisted that I cannot help but feel horrified yet excited by their many unexpected actions after each chapter I read. Hermione is so badass after the cave scene that I wonder if it's another Jekyll/Hyde thing you've got going on in the story. OH! And the forest creatures as well!! I'm still being chased by the Chimera in my nightmares!

Umm...yes. I think I'm on the verge of ranting, so I'll stop for now. But seriously. It's really good. I think I finished the whole thing in 17 hours. Approximately. My brain feels a bit too fuzzy to put in the right calculations.

The one negative feeling that I'm getting out of finishing chapter 19 is regret for not discovering this fantastic piece of fanfiction 3 years ago when it was still the talk of the town and there was a distinct possibility that you would re-update.

Oh well. Onto Chosen's Trial and the Beggar Thief!

I must say that it has been ages since I have read anything that has actually caused the skin on my back to crawl. During the part in chapter twelve when the unicorn head swiveled around to face them actually made the hairs on the back of neck stand up. Amazing I surely applaud you on that imagery. I hope you come back to writing the story sometime soon.

Hey Gravidy,

I don't know how active your account is these days, but I've been obsessing over this story and I'm really heartbroken to see that it hasn't been updated in 3 years!

It really is an awesome fic, and I'm just hoping that it will continue.

PLEASE?!? :D

please continue this story is an amazing work and the best i have read. after finishing reading your story i try to go and find others completed that is similar to yours.. but i couldnt find one near as yours. so please finish it because your story is amazing and it deserved to be finish.

lol pansy that lying bitch

im sorry that i havent reviewed so far!

but your story is interseting!, i wonder what made them teleport in the forest

*sigh*

The good die young, and the good fanfics stay unfinished.

Thanks for the ride, even if you didn't at least leave us with an awakened Draco.

no!! you can't leave this unfinished! :'(

"Maybe it had to rethink its own existence. She knew the feeling."
~Good lord, this story has me entranced. I started it about five hours ago and can't seem to walk away.

AWESOME story! It's constantly thrilling - you are such a wonderful storyteller! I can barely begin to understand how much energy it takes to create something so massive, but please don't stop! This is such a beautiful thing, being able to watch their characters grow and change in completely unexpected yet believable ways... I will not be disappointed no matter how the story ends now, the journey has been so exciting. Just please let us know what happens! I read briefly on your livejournal that you're worried about being cliche... but how could it be? In such an original and meticulously well-formed situation? Even if somehow, defying all odds, it is cliche... a huge, massive hulk smash of cliche... I WILL BE HAPPY! And I bet everyone following this story will be happy, too! We love you! We love Hermione/Draco! And most importantly, THANK YOU SO MUCH for your energy and creativity! Good luck :)

OMG!

This is the Efing best happy potter story ever(Sorr i don't feel like cussing right now, to tired, and if you dont like cussing srry cause i dont give a damn.)

Anywayz where waz i...

Awesome story took me a while and i mean a while to read the whole thing you have up so far. Hopfully they don't die facing the *Gods* and probablly wont cause they never do in any story.

xoxo SweetSweetRevenge

p.s.

Luv da STory!

Your mishmash amused me, too. I giggled. Kind of like a ninny.

And wow, you might be getting sick of hearing this, but I absolutely love this story and would be ecstatic if you continued it. I can only hope, right?

You need to finish this story. I need to know what happens.
You are an amazing writer... it completely held my attention the entire time.

omg best story, it so thrilling, and makes u hang off the edge of ur seat. PLEASE CONTINUE!

OMG. I love your stories, particularly this one. PLEASE continue it. It's really amazing. I got scared reading it...the whole god-eating part...eeuugh.

Anyway, yours is the only fanfic I've read that elicits that reaction xD It's great. please continue it.

I especially like how you can make the whole world seem involved in your story, like some huge plot of fate all waiting to play out. The..setting? scope? it's great.

Please review my story, I really need thoughtful reviews!