aw, this is so good! amazing concept ;p

This is so amazing that I just almost hate you. How do you DO that?

. . . Just an inquiry. :)

that. was. perfect.

the style was beautiful and fit them both really well; you made the pairing perfect, any other one wouldn't have worked in this story. i'm amazed how you're able to say so much in such few words with this.

I really believe (strictly MY opinion) that you are at your best with experimental pieces like this-fascinating, following Nini's thoughts, suggesting without ever hitting us on the head-until the end!-or in pieces like Chocolate? Rather than the more conventional narrative pieces. The experimental stuff is your gift.

good god

that was beyond perfect, the stream on conscious was just so perfectly written.

plus, it was nini/christian, which is muchly needed to shake things up a bit *g*

we should catch up, if you still want. i'll mail you soon. you rock.

Celyn

Nice one.

i hate u 4 writing a chritsian/nini fic, i hated it bcuz christian wud never do that

Oh, Lord, Milla. This was simply amazing in every way. I think it was the fact that it was stream of consciousness. It set it apart. And you pulled it off brilliantly. Not that I'd expect otherwise, you know.

God.

Perfect.

This story was incredible, as I have to expect from you. I have never read a Nini/Christian, and I suppose I'm a bit opposed to it, but I genuinely enjoyed this ficlet.

You're simply brill, you know that, right?

"forgive me father for i have sinned." I liked that line. A lot.

I liked it all.

...hmm sadistic. liked it though in a sordid way, true rather than beautiful. which i suppose is better.

You have an amazing gift! You are a most talented author, you know? Well, this was very well done, which goes without saying! You have an amazing talent for writing!

From,

Hindi Sad Diamonds.

xox

Beautiful. Gorgeous. Indescribable.

Hey that was a really good story! Even though I'm not at all a fan of Nini and Christian, it was still really well written! :D

Good work!

Oh my god! That was just so incredibly good! And the ending, when I got there I had to reread it just to make sure I'd read the whole thing! You kept me guessing up until the very end! I love Nini/Christian too! Keep up the fabulously spectacular work!

Bohemian Diamonds (the first half)

P.S. I'm definetly adding this to my favorites! (You're in our favorite authors list too!)

Milla.

I just to have to say that I love you. :D

Non-sexually, of course.

*sighs* Yes, I know why. And y'know, that was truly beautiful. I don't know what it was I liked about it but everything seemed so perfect. Perhaps it was the stream of consciousness idea. Whatever it was, it was very, very effective.