i couldn't review chapter five for some reason it just wouldnt let me. so i am doubleing a review thingy i am just going to say some thing for both because i saw nothing wrong with any chapter and i absolutly loved all of it! you get infinate brownie/cookie points and cyber hugs!

The Good: Great dialogue, good characterization

The bad: Since you have so much dialouge, try writing a little setting and a little description of the surroundings and the characters. Since it is fanfiction you don't have to be as descriptive compared to normal fiction but a little description and narration combined with your dialouge would probably improve your fic.

But overall very good, and I'm impressed.

o..m...g...you havent updated in like 5 years?WTF?! why is is that the good stories ALWAYS freakin get abandoned

For some reason I can't review chapter 5... Update ASAP! I totally loved this!

It's probably been years since you last touched fandom, but I just wanted to say that this story was very promising. Sometimes the dialogue went on a little too long, but it was always natural and flowed easily. I liked your characterization of Naruto and Sasuke, especially the near-choking scene, and Jiraiya was awesome. It's been a long time since I first read this story, but I kept on coming back to it. It was well done.

This is such an awesome story you should definitely add on to it. Some parts are pretty funny and over all it is very good. So please add on soon. I want to find out what happens next.

Hi. Love the story. I was wondering if you're going to continue it or have you abandon it. It's a really good story.

update! update! update! the tension is killing me i want to know what happens next! please! please! please! i have read all five chapters like a million times please update soon!

inuyashadogbob

P.S PLEASE!

this was realy good, well time to read on.

i've read chappie 5, my computer wouldnt let me review for that chappi though so i'm reviewing on this chappie.

GET NARUTO OUT OF THERE! poor naruto, he's been kidnapped but now he's being tortured. what did kisame see in his eyes afterward? please update soon!

Stupid thing wouldn't let me review for chapter 5... Anyway! What an awesome story! How could you just quit on it?! I wanna now what happens next!!Why did Itachi want to know who almost killed him before, or is it he wanted to know who put the cursed seal on his brother? Whatever. What else is he looking for and what was the change in Naruto's eyes that Kisame missed? PLEASE finish the story! It's so COOL!

This fic is AWESOMENESS BEYOND AWESOMENESS!! Update soon!

Wait a minute, Naruto was kidnapped and that was how he couldn't use his legs? I thought it happened in the fight, the Sennin and Kabuto. And what Kabuto did to him beating him up. He did die but Tsuade brought him back, with the Kyuubi's help though.

Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.

its soo funny...ha ha ha...but you write
to long...

update,update update!! i like this story.. a good fiction^-^