Hi I really like this story I thought both chapter were well written and yes i think you should continue with this story I can't wait for the next chapter

Wow... That was great!

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Beautifully done! Can't wait for part 3. (I hope it's from Gary's POV.)

Please continue! I want to know what happens next!

Wow!EXCELLENT STORY! Please write more about Gary/Erica! I love the pair, but there's very little fanfiction about them. Please hurry with the 3rd part...I'm really looking forward to reading it!

Wow! That was REALLY great! You are an excellent writer! I've seen this episode a few times, and I have to say that you captured the moods and emotions perfectly. If part three is any better then this, you better send your story to the producers of the show, maybe your writing will influence them to make season 5! (Wishful thinking.) Keep writing! (Don't worry about anyone writing anything bad, because anyone who does, obviously dosen't know great work when they read it!)

You should deafinatly finish!

Part 3. Yes. Very good. I'll beta read it if you'd like. I'm very good at that sort of thing.

Wow, I love your writing! You are really good at this! Cool pen name, too! (Did you notice I got mine from Early Edition, too? Hehe!) I'm putting this fic on my favorites now, it's really good! Keep writing! :c)