 Aoi Hoshi Chan 2003-05-22 . chapter 1Oh WOW!
This is so good! I love it! It is kinda plotless... but SO?! Fluff is good stuff! *buries nose in pillow* Iluvitiluvitiluvit!
Well, this one was excellent, as far as songifcs and oneshots go. I didn't think it was TOO cliched, but I don't read an awful lot of Inuyasha fics. Written one - the rest are DBZ. (Goten is just too adorable, and I'm a sucker for chibis!) But Kagome and Inuyasha are pretty in-character. Just one glitch - if she goes thru the well back to her own time, spends two days at home, and goes back, won't two days have passed in Feudal Japan as well? So when he came to her door, he would've been full human with black hair, hai? I just kinda think her mom would've made some comment on that...
Otherwise, very nice. LOVE IT! ^_^ |