Good story / Bad formatting

LMAO the bastard Earl of Ankh! Good one!
Loved this and as usual the characters are dead on and the writing flawless!

Great, just great, terry pratchett, youve got compotion

Excellent story.

This is great, brilliantly funny. 'Sarcanyon' really should be a word.

The thing made me laugh giddily with delight. I'm doing that a lot today.

About the formatting--I know HTML, and it can format your stories to show up right if you want me to format them for you. I wouldn't mind doing it with such funny fics as these.

This fic, like many of yours, has me giggling giddily at every witticism. It's hilarious. I like!

I love it! Besides being a good plot and story, it's well written... I think you'd make a good writer

Sam... you rock. You just rock.

i could see it coming from chapter 3, but it was a very good end, also it leaves open room for what i just sed aboot

befor i finish the story im going 2 say, well done, so far its so funny i want 2 cry, before reading the end (after which this comment might seem a bit stupid) he said over his living body, so I was thinking you might be able to mix this fic, and the 1s with him as a zombie together.


he wouldnt be breathing any longer, so to stick by his word he'd become king of Pseudopolis

i would like to thank you for an excellent story, i have read a lot of authors submissions to this site and i find that yours is the first i have read that i feel compelled to comment on.
as a huge fan of PTerry's work and the Discworld in particular i found this work of yours to be astounding, personally i feel that you have captured the essence of each character beautifully.
all i can say now is please please keep up the good work.
i look forwards to reading more of your fanfics on this site

Wonderful! I think this may be one of my favorite stories of yours yet.

*Insert happy face* This is the way you should do it. No days/weeks of jumpstarting the computer and darting in to see if there's another chapter around ;)

Well written, you stuck to the original characters well. Godd idea to start with. I especaily liked the exchange between the Patrician and Sam Vimes.

Hope you write more soon.

Caddie.