Good fanfic. I have no complaints.

That's not the end is it? this is really good! please say it continues!!

How sad? How tragic!

That is cool and sad. Is there more? Would be cool if it continued.

Aww, poor Shadow. If this is done, it sounds like it Needs a sequal. Just to tell us what happens to our beloved Black Hedghog now.

Plot- 8, not much of one, but that's not a problem
Originality- 8
Descriptions- 7, there really weren't any physical, and mental could use abut of work
Style- 8
Genre- 9, it was mainly angst
Overall- 8, it should really be a 7.5, but it's better than a lot of the stuff in the Sonic section. You should work on your descriptions a bit.

. . .Right.
By-the-by, since you seem to like it so much, Much Ado About Doom has been updated.

Great story. You should read mine, The chimney sometime Its rated R but has a good plot. I plan to read more on this story some time later. Great Story I liked it alot. Hope you add some more some time.

See Ya!

Wah! p_q Poor Shadow... Wah!

Great job, Spark! Keep the writin' rollin', and you'll be marked in history! K? Later!

SonicFrank: Long live the Blue Hedgehog