aww your very talented this story made me happy and blushy!x3

Yeah, u should write more. The rating is fine

STOP MAKING MARTH GAY!... HE IS TO GODLY FOR THAT!

this is excellent continue!

I really think you should post a lemon

Short and Sweet! I love those kind of stories. GOOD JOB!

Please continue on this fanfic. I would love to see how it would progress! :)

I should stop laughing like crazy when I read yaoi stuff...people stare...whatever this is so kawaii! Roy is so lovely and shy like the feeling of taking a picture! I hope you wrote a lemon, if not please!

No wai... You were Kawaii-Divas? I love you man! Okay, sorry. I don't usually don't do things like that. This is my favorite pairing too! Yay! I'm not alone...^-^

i think it was a sweet, as in happy story, you should definitley continue your work!!

Yes! make a lemon if you could please, separately?

oh yeah, continuing would be awsome :D

Lemons! Me want lemons! I haven't read a lemon in AGES!

By the way, you writing is excellent. Are you in a gifted language arts class?

I hope that when I write an SSBM yaoi fanfic, I want you to be the first reviewer! =^_^= ...If you could, that is... Remember, never let Admins or critics push you down the ladder; it happened to me and my fic Crazy Dazy Sleepover, with some good reviews... and a threat from Yoshi the Borg (what's his problem?).

Fanfics are about creativity! It doesn't matter how you write, as long as you follow your heart and get a shitload worth of reviews! Yowza!

There's no such things as rules for a story. Write what your spirit guides to and you'll have a wonderful story! Count on it.

Crazy as always, Lashamaru Otaku.

God I like! UPDATE SOON! Lemons r good...

Oh, this is so CUTE! I LOVE it! I think the way you ended this story was just fine!

Keep up the great work! ^^