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Holy moly kind of interesting and great.

It's curious, you know. This whole story's premise . . . Who *is* the greater evil? Serenity or Pluto? They've done and ordered horrible, horrible things for the sake of a higher purpose. Seeing Serenity do them was hard enough, but, I suppose, understandable. I'm not sure I *wouldn't* have done the same thing, were I in the same position. Pluto is the same. It's frightening that, really, you *can* see the parallels between the real world and your story. Those in positions of power do things because they believe them to be the right things, or at least necessary. They aren't necessarily *good* decisions, or ethical ones, but they believe they need to happen to secure a better future. You see manipulation in everyday life, it's just scarier when you see people you trust doing the manipulating. Excellent story, by the way. It makes one think, doesn't it?

I love it you simply must continue this intresting story!

A very interesting story, with many elementw in it, that made up an interesting collage of genres. With the Matrix-y stuf at the beggining, followed by more traditional anime combo's at the end of the story. Looking forward to seeing what happens in another story. Funny, imo, it seems as though Pluto set these events in motion, just wondering if this was something deliberate on her part, maybe?

Love it! Can't wait for the third chapter!

Odd, but intriguing. You do that a lot.

I personally wouldn't pick Nabiki to be a traitor. For all her mercenary nature, she is quite protective of family.

Very good story.

This would HAVE been a potential story if it weren't for the whole betrayal formula... It's very old and cliche...

This would HAVE been a potential story if it weren't for the whole betrayal formula... It's very old and cliche...