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| Kiros Razer 2008-10-04 ch 1,  | abuseI haven't come across too many tactics Shoujo Ai fics. This one was very good. |
| Lord Jareth 2003-10-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is nice. I'll check out some of your other stuff. |
| Songstress Rikku 2003-07-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this a lot! I also interpreted Rafa's comment about Barinten to mean rape. Cute, sweet story! |
| Donraj 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abuseA very well written piece. Unlike most fics relating to same-sex pairings, this one is believable, well-written, and does NOT led me to believe you are writting it for sexual gratification. I give it thumbs up. |
| Seravy 2003-05-26 ch 1, | abuseyea! fft shoujo ai! this was a great fic. I really liked it. The relationship portrayed was plausible and I liked how Rafa is dropping hints here and there. Quite pleasing and sweet to read. But I doubt they would use the word clinic in their world. Either then that, write more! |
| Evanescence 2003-05-23 ch 1, | abuseI really like the imagery you've used (especially the impending storm, and when Meliadoul is trying to light the fire), and the concept catches my eye. You may want to clean up the dialogue a bit (periods and commas), but otherwise, nifty-keen stuff. ^^ |