Shiho is very OOC but it's okay with me (I still don't like her, though.

This is excellent, perfect... Keep writing.

awesome story

awesomeness. please write sequel

This was such a beautiful story! It was a pleasure to read it! PLease continue w/ more stories like this one!

~SonChan

wow that was so sweet and wonderful and i loved it! poor shiho, but shinichi was rans all along... i loved it!

ugh idiot! its ur ran! if you kepp thinking about her, why are u with shiho?? at least shiho is trying to be nice about it

hehe that was an awesome book! ne? aw this was a sad chapter *sob*

omg omg omg i cnt believe it! haha poor shinichi this will jus complicate things... and poor ran, her new friend is shinichi's girlfriend

i think it helped him tho. except for shiho, i dnt like her...

and ran will win, of course!! yay aris gonna help shinichi! i hope shell be able to

yay! now hell be able to see ran! yayayayayayay!

oh no! shinichi! run ran run!!haha that sounds so funny!! get heiji fast!

NO DONT MAKE IT AN S/S! poor ran, its true if he spends all his time with shiho then hell fall in love with her because he doesnt remember ran! AND some guy is trying to kill him!!

OH NO he doesnt think shiho is ran does he? and why is he acting so weird?

hehe im bearing lol but omg omg omg is jimmy ok?? and the picture!! thats a sign that something bad is gonna happen!