please please please please continue :)

You keep switching between the North American dubs (of BOTH shows I might add) and the original Japanese versions, choose one and stick with it. You obviously know Usgai's Mom's Japanese name, why can't you do enough research to figure out that Naru is MOLLY's original name?

I don't mind reading a fic based around the dub, but you keep switching! You use Hercule's name in one sentence then in the next you use Mr.S, stick with one.

cool

I Love The Chapter:29 Plz Plz Update It Soon!!

love it but please keep serena and gohan please!update soon!

loved it

good

Please update son! Poor Videl. :(

This ** almost killed me!Learn how to write you basturd!

very interesting story can't wait to read more. serena should have given videl a major beating though

hmm...poor Trunks...i always rather liked him... how're they gonna manage to get serena alone if they all needa be there?

I love it please up date asap!

Awesome story! Cant wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

Awesome. Rather short though ...
Write more soon.
- Damia -

Nice job! I hope that you update soon!