This is brilliant. I don't know how you do it.. but I'm glad you do! This is very funny and just perfect.

Clare

Delightful! (and I can see Severus doing just that..taking off points for being late xD)

lol that was great:)

L M F A O.
You cannot understand how much this made me laugh!
This must be the funniest parody I've ever read in my life, it eve beats your "That Potter Slash"!
Oh how the tears pour from my eyes :')
Fantastic, absolutely fantastic!

Wow. Wish I could rhyme that well. GReat story

Oh, my Godric *wipes tears from eyes* That was FUNNY! I don't approve of Harry/Snape myself (I'm a bit afraid to even try it) But wow. that was freakin' hilarious. Also, I love 'You are old, father William', so, yeah. Kudos to you, mate.
Love and Slash
Raelin Lupin

You're weird.

truly amazing. i don't know how you did it.

Sweet merciful LAWD I love this poem, I almost cried from laughing so hard!

LOL!

really well done - you even managed to make it scan!
5 stars... hahahahaha

now all i need to do is stop laughing!

*laughing so hard* This is pure - genius! This is going to pop into my head at work and I'm going to die laughing, I just know it. Awesome work! I love this so much

that's an awsome and super funny poem. plus it's just horrible too. i love it

absolutely fantastic! i was laughing the entire time. great job, very well written and clever. a new fav, for sure!

Wow... just wow.

I liked Father William, and this is a hilarious rendition

I know this was written a long time ago, but this was AMAZING! I laughed the whole time! I'm a big fan of Alice, so this poem was the perfect mix of two stories that I love so much! You kick ass hun! ^_^