Cute. It's very silly how they over-complicate things...

lol!

You know, I was more amused by your A/N's than the story itself... I didn't count how many times you said this'd be the Very Last Chapter, but it was very often.
-But of course the story was great to ;)

You're Barista stories are really great. At first I thought it was going to be an exercise in Mary-Suedom but I found this through a very reliable favorites list and thought to give it a chance. Wise move on my part, I think.

Kira is a very likable character, if a bit obsessed with the looks of our favorite military guys (I did like that bit you added about her sometimes going weeks without thinking about them). Her voice is very clear I just wish you had been able to add more to her background by this point (This is a comment/review for Barista upto ch 18 and the Bonus) and how that affects her thought processes.

Anyway, reason why I commented now instead of later is so that I could let you know that I find your author's notes at the beginning of the chapters funny enough that I just skipped ahead so I could see your comments on why you can't just end the story. Heh...I think the nondenominational hell was my favorite. ^o^

ROFLOL I love how you write Jack! I can't write his sense of humor myself, so I always like it when I find a good Jack-humor-fic...

Another excellent Kira story!! I just love your idea of a undercover/military op relating to a birthday party gone wrong story. Good job!!

I've got to tell you, I am really enjoying these Barista stories. I loved this bonus one, and am really enjoying the main series.

most brilliant

Ah yes diet coke, don't you just love it? lol.=)

#laughs# The first thing that popped into my head when Daniel brought up 'harmless' was indeed, 'mostly harmless'. Great ending! Can't wait to finish the rest of 'The Barista'!

OMG, I LOVE THIS FIC! I just love Kira/Daniel in general. I happened to read this in bulk from your homepage, and I'm glad I didn't skip over it due to it's initial length. I must say, that the team interaction in the beginning was amazingly done; nothing was cliched, because the insight on how the team dynamic is cool. I love how normally it's Daniel who gets hurt and Sam taking care of everyone. And when I got to the part about the roofees being the date rape drug, I felt the chill and deep anger with which Jack said those words, and I definitely could see Daniel's face go white. My favorite part was the kiss. I was dearly missing Daniel/Kira and the Barista/Assistant series, so this really helped:) I hope you get the time to write some stuff soon, thanks so much for everything!

SMEG YEAH!! SHANNARO! Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy rules!! ^_^ I love that series!!

Good story by the way. I loved it. Tres adorable. ^_^

Lmao. I love how you did Teal'c's POV. It was perfect. ^_^

You totally cracked me up - again! Dunno what my neighbors will think of me howling with laughter - this chapter is just so great! As is the whole story... I really like your writing! You managed great to mix in the off-world-adventure (liked that, but as a shameless shipper I'd loved to see Jack more concerned ;-) But it's perfect the way you did it because it's a Kira-story, right? :-) ).

You are one of a very few authors I'm always eager to read a new story from. Wish you had the time to write all day *sigh* (that from somebody who neglegted her own story for over 18 months now...) Keep up your great work! :-)

Great story. You really do capture the characters characterness very well. I can honestly say that i don't think any of the characters were OOC in this story. While I don't mind OOCness (is that a word?) It was nice to see someone effeciantly capture the characters feelings and motivations for once. Well done.