oh...*laughs* that's priceless

Hmm...Hermione seemed a bit OOC. Yet, it was good.

That was great. Loved the 'Oh.', 'Oh?' comments.

This was really good. I like how well you sorta knew hermione, always thinking and sorta avoiding the human race. Bravo.

nice, a little fast paced. But not bad.

creepy

bravo! wonderfully written!

not to be picky or anything but I think you should add more detail.

short but good

This is good. Now, I'd like to see what Ginny's thinking right now!

Steve Jester

Oh hun, this was an interesting story. Never read femme slash before. An interesting experience. Anyhow, about the story... I think you were a bit off on the characterization. You made Hermione a little too laid back.
"Says she’s been trying to get me to notice her for ages, but I guess I’m a bit thick when it comes to stuff like that, a bit oblivious."