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| Lord-Azula 2007-12-20 ch 1,  | abuseoh...*laughs* that's priceless |
| Pink Illusion 2007-07-31 ch 1, | abuseHmm...Hermione seemed a bit OOC. Yet, it was good. |
| Mags 2007-06-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was great. Loved the 'Oh.', 'Oh?' comments. |
| BrownHairedWeasleyKid09 2007-01-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was really good. I like how well you sorta knew hermione, always thinking and sorta avoiding the human race. Bravo. |
| Sapphos-Daughter 2006-03-05 ch 1, | abusenice, a little fast paced. But not bad. |
| Your Imaginery Friend Rache... 2005-02-23 ch 1, | abusecreepy |
| Every Now And Then 2003-11-24 ch 1, | abusebravo! wonderfully written! |
| unknown 2003-10-13 ch 1, anon. | abusenot to be picky or anything but I think you should add more detail. |
| fan 2003-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseshort but good |
| Steve Jester 2003-05-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is good. Now, I'd like to see what Ginny's thinking right now! Steve Jester |
| Nirvana (omivision_edition2... 2003-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh hun, this was an interesting story. Never read femme slash before. An interesting experience. Anyhow, about the story... I think you were a bit off on the characterization. You made Hermione a little too laid back. "Says she’s been trying to get me to notice her for ages, but I guess I’m a bit thick when it comes to stuff like that, a bit oblivious." |