I really enjoyed this story very much...will there be more?? Pleae?? :D

Ohh what a cute story. Please write some more. Storm is so doggone cute!

Aw, that's so cute! Yay for Storm! Can't wait for more!!

If it has a cat in it, I'll probably love it.

Overall, this was a very enjoyable story. Storm must be related with my kitties, for they behave exactly this way.

Just check your punctuation a bit.

This was such a sweet story! I loved how Storm saved the day. He's just so adorable! As long as I've been alive, my family has always had cats and kittens, and I could relate to all those cat antics in this story. We've had some super-wild ones, and in fact have a wild one right now! She also grabs people's arms and holds on, wrapping her body around! Anyway, such a great story! Thanks!

Cute! i love cats, and i do wish there were even some mention of them in Lord of the Rings. Especially useful ones. The writing style is good too--keep writing more chapters!

Hello, it is me again ;)
You really know your kittens well and also their obsession with bacon. What a pleasant suprise to learn that Storm is a Fae creature. How delightful. The line about Elrond doing battle with his clothes reall made me laugh out loud. Good for Storm! Protecting his family the way he did. I am really loving this series of stories and hope you write many more.
Peace,
Amy

The scene with the kitten stalking Elrond while he tries to sleep is so true! My kitten used to stalk me like that too. Every time I would open my eyes she would be closer. And Yes you do get the feeling you are being watched. This story is such lighthearted fun and a really nice change from all the angsty stories I have read. I love it! keep up the excellent work!
Peace,
Amy

GIRL TREE #1: cute. original. a mary-sue cat. that's not a dis. fun!
GIRL TREE #2:the only kind of mary-sue i can handle. bloody brilliant. i love it. what i wouldn't give to be in storm's place...i could bug elrond! woot!

Hee, hee, I liked this story! I'm the same giveGodtheglory as lurks at Angelsandelves.
Looking forward to reading the rest of your work.
God bless you!

Hi! It's ME again. (Stupid nickname.) I'm sorry if my english is bad but try to understand what I'm speaking.
I'm very glad about to see you continue with this story. I really love Storm. He is so cute. And I love Elrond too. This is one of my favorite stories here so keep it going :D

Brave Storm!! Lovely and delightful!! (Wish hed come here and eat the mosquitoes!!))
Good chapter Arabiasil!

AW! This was so cute :) Excellent job. Please continue with this story.

LOL! I really enjoyed this. Storm was very cute indeed, and Elrond was gloriously in character, even while fighting with his own clothes :)

Poor Elrond, poor Twins!

A great, fun story. Thanks :)

"Everyone in Thranduil's party stood wide eyed as Elrond stood in the courtyard, seemingly doing battle with his own clothes."

That made me laugh out loud. That is a wonderful mental image.

Even though it's not canon I kinda like the idea of elven cats. There were special dogs clearly, think Huan the Hound of Valinor; he could talk, was intelligent was large enought to ride. Maybe a bunch Valinor of cats stowed away when the Noldor came back to ME. These special Valinor cats are tenacious, intelligent and unutterably adorable! ;)