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| TheSwedishMystery 2005-06-12 ch 11,  | abuseWhat a great sequel! |
| KariAnn 2003-08-07 ch 4, | abuseVery good story, but you must work on your (belonging), you're (you are), there (over there), their (belonging) and they're (they are). Those words plus it's (it is) and its (belonging) are the most common mistakes I see writers use. Also the word is dagger, not danger. This was funny to read in Part Three. "Call for the danger, Paige." Find a friend or connect with a Beta Reader. You have a very nice collection of stories. Good plots, action, and story movement, but your spelling and puncuation need help. That's what editors are for. |
| Roby Murphy 2003-07-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseCool I love this story, even if Paige, Piper, and Phoebe have to go through all this pain. It shows you how strong as people they really are. |
| Daisy 2003-07-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseah! u hafta keep going! like realy soon. update now! |
| ab 2003-07-17 ch 10, anon. | abuseplease we want more and hurry this is the best |
| km 2003-07-01 ch 1, anon. | abusehurry up im dying of the wait, going on holiday soon and want anouther chapter before i go. please |
| Paigefan 2003-06-22 ch 9, anon. | abuseno,no,no,no,no, don't stop there, i need more, this is so good |
| scrawn 2003-06-21 ch 9, anon. | abuseoh poor paige, update soon! |
| Daisy 2003-06-19 ch 8, anon. | abuseyay, paige is gettin happy again!! keep going!! |
| a 2003-06-19 ch 8, anon. | abuseterrific but i would like to see piper and paige bonding more. please more chapters and dont make us wait forever |
| luermide 2003-06-16 ch 7, | abuseAwesome! Update soon or else! |
| Daisy 2003-06-15 ch 7, anon. | abusepoor paige. hopefully, they can all help her through this. update very very very soon! |
| A 2003-06-15 ch 7, anon. | abuseplease continue and hurry this is an amazing story, id like to see piper and paige bonding as sisters and piper still hasent said she loves paige. you should make this into a series |
| a 2003-06-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseplease update this story soon its been about a week already dont let those talents go to waste |
| Inactive1 2003-06-07 ch 6, | abuseDamnit Kath, update already! i've been waiting andd waiting and waiting...gr. Update. |