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| JMMendiola 2008-09-14 ch 20, | abusePlease update soon! This is an incredible story! |
| AoMorigirl 2008-09-13 ch 20, | abuseI really really love this story. I am holding out on the hope that Ranewen (Violet) comes back, too much sadness is already present in Harry's life. Can't wait to read more! |
| Vampyre Neko 2008-09-12 ch 20, | abuseEvening :] I happened upon your story (I love LOTRHP crossovers) but after some consideration i think i'll wait until you post the edited version before i read it. In one of your author notes you asked for assistance in how to say 'yes' in elvish. i don't know if it was answered, but usually one would say 'Mae' to say yes which, as you know, directly translates to 'Well'. My own studies of the language has lead me to believe that emphasis is placed more upon what emotions/imagery is conveyed above accuracy. I hope that helps :] Please let me know when you plan to post your edited version; I am looking forward to it =D xx |
| GuinevereRose 2008-09-07 ch 18, | abuseThough I really like this chapter, I feel as if the story is now about Remus because half the chapter was about him and his flashbacks. I hope to see more of Harry in the next chapter. Great job! |
| GuinevereRose 2008-09-07 ch 16, | abuseI'm really enjoying the story! I've recently started reading HP/LOTR crossovers where Harry is taken to Middle Earth and yours is my favorite! I can't wait to read more! |
| katamarigrl 2008-07-19 ch 3, anon. | abuseI think it is very impressive and shows a great commitment to your work that you translated all that dialogue into Elvish. That being said I have to wonder what drove you to do that. Having to skip sections of every line is very annoying to read. Perhaps I am mistaken but I would think that the majority of your readers, myself included, are not fluent in Elvish. Please stick to English for the most part with some bits of Elvish thrown in and avoid the headache and aggravation please. |
| Shadow Death 2008-07-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseI am so inspired by your work and commitment. the fact that you would go and even write in elven in outstanding! I myself can read and talk in elven but unforchantly i cant write in elven.. *sighs* keep up the good work! |
| DarkquillMaster 2008-06-28 ch 5, | abuseThis is a great story but I am very confused. So are Harry and Violet engaged or are they married? Also they really havn't shown it if they are. Also what do you think of a crossover with a Harry/Galadriel where harry is sent there to get strong and is sent to a couple of years before the time when the Elven people come to Middle-Earth and meets them when they first land but on the journey to their demention Harry get's turned into a Night Elf first of his kind(also w/black angel wigns on his back) and gets training from the Valar. Then meets them when the Elves land and falls in love with Galadriel the moment he see's her there and becomes bonded to her. He defeats souron in the first war against him and disapears but turns up years later when Aragorn is brought as a baby and descises himself as a 4year old and is "raised" by Elrond. But reveals his true self to everyone when Lord Celeborn and Galadriel Come to visit Estel.(Celeborn is like Galadriels brother but is not married to Galadriel but acts like he is a lord because Galadriel needs the support and Arwen is really Harrys Granddaughter not Celeborn's but they make everyone beleive it till Harry comes back.) Also incest as Arwen falls for Harry(Emrys) (she doesn't know at the time he is her grandfather) and only marries Aragorn because she cares about him and doesn't want to break his heart but when he dies she joins her father in the elf heaven. What do you think that is a posible plot I am thinking of because I have never seen a Harry/Galadriel pairing and I think it would be a great pairing. What do you think? |
| SpringCherryBlossom 2008-05-31 ch 2, | abuseI don't know why you are making this story more difficalt(in my opinon) by acually putting what they say in a different language then translate it. I think it just a was of time(and kinda hard to read). But its your chose :-) |
| InlovewithMalfoy 2008-05-18 ch 6, | abusethis is a really cool story :) |
| Book Lover95 2008-05-14 ch 20, | abuseGood job!! :D |
| He-who-must-eat-chocolate 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abusemost people usually just write "from so and so" on a present, rather than play with tags... |
| jay21317 2008-04-25 ch 2, | abusedefiantly interesting but only annoying and highly frustrating bit is that you speak in elvish and then translate it right away and it don't look right no offense but it looks horrible the way you have set it up would probably be easier to do it in English |
| sendoh11 2008-04-25 ch 20, | abusethis is great. but seeing that gandalf didn't die because of the balrog, would the plot be changed? |
| The Devil knows when im aro... 2008-04-24 ch 20, | abusei really realy really want you to write more soon this is so good |