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| Joan Milligan 2003-05-25 ch 1,  | abuseVery well written - rich, detailed, a clear sort of prose. Spelling, grammar and punctuation mostly good. Original premise - and this being the problem. It would, I imagine, make a much better original story than a LotR fanfic. No reason to use Tolkien's world when you obviously are only in need of a generic fantasy setting. |