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| sylphstarwind 2006-05-18 ch 1,  | abuseNice thing going with the plant theme. Aw, how cute. I'm checking out Tohru/Honda stories... |
| Dark Inu Fan 2005-04-06 ch 1, | abusetohru may seem simple and innocent, but she can easily open other's eyes to her point of view. keep up the good work on your other stories, dark |
| Ohrakupunk 2003-07-16 ch 1, | abuseWhen I first saw the show where it explained Hatori's story, I almost cried!! It was so sad and now your fic almost made me cry... *sniff sniff* This fic was VERY well written!! Congratulaions! Maybe you should write a one shot for every Souma character to explain their problems and how Tohru helped them to get better...?? ^^;; |
| Lina Inverse the Dramata 2003-05-29 ch 1, | abuseAw how cute. ^_^ Nifty short fic. |
| Sailor Panda 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseMinor detail note, Hatori actually calls Tohru 'Honda-kun.' Aside from that, I only had a little problem with the beginning of the second scene where Tohru knocks on the door. You go into how she feels from 3rd person pov but that's the only section where it occurs and it's a bit weird since the rest of it is told from Hatori's pov. It's just that one line though which is an easy fix. Everything else is good. It's a got a bittersweet tinge to it but I liked the positive note that it ended on. Nice job. (^^) |
| Skittles1 2003-05-25 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was very good. Poor Hari...yet the end was hopeful. I loved it, especially the symbolizism with the plant. Also, I think it didn't only connect with Tohru. The seedling is almost like Kyou, Yuki, and the rest of the cursed people because they've always been out in the cold all their life. Always sad, lonely, cursed, dark, etc but Tohru brought them inside and gave them happiness, just like Kana gave Hari happiness, and she's giving them a chance to experience a kind and loving atmosphere!! Yay! So it connects with them too in a way...heheh I loved the whole story! Beautiful! |
| Dark Phoenix 2003-05-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is a one-shot? Oww... too bad, I kinda hope to see a good Toriru series nowadays. Your style of writing is lovely, and you capture the melancholy mood that is Hatori's very well. Please write more, or another toriru! ^_^ |