 SparrowsTreasure 2005-07-09 . chapter 1Hey! I'm so sorry it took me forever to come read some of your work and review! Now that I have read it I just wish I'd done it sooner! I know you read my Logan and Marie saga a long time ago, but I still needed to come over and read your stuff! I enjoyed it and now I'm going to read the rest of your work! Great work by the way!
Ginger Ale |
 EvilWhiteRaven 2004-11-20 . chapter 3hey nice story. wow you really need to update lol. can't wait to see when he meets the other mutants. oh yeah, i found you off of xanga, lol. anyways i hope you write more soon ^_^ |
 Ale 2003-12-21 . chapter 3 For fear of making my comp freeze, I've decided not to sign in with my pen name, Lol. I'm Sparrowstreasure, though ^_^. Just wanted to drop you a few lines saying: Nice writing! I like the chapters so far, and good job at creating an OC. Please write soon. Bai bai! |
 DemonicGambit 2003-09-12 . chapter 3Hey sorry I haven't reviewed, but my stupid computer was being a POS. But I like it, very good. Keep writing! :) |
 Flaire Delacour with Faith 2003-08-22 . chapter 3thank you so much for my review i really appreciate it!
I really like your story and i think the plot is a very interesting one.
hope you will continue to read and review my stories.
~*Flaire*~ |
 Lady Destiny 2003-08-19 . chapter 3aw. I hope they get to Xavier's safely... unless you plan on them being found by Mags or someone... update soon! |
 Wolfstarfox 2003-08-17 . chapter 3 LALALALALA. I'm mindless. Anyway- good job- bad spelling and grammar. hehe jk. Woah mind spinning. |
 Nadja Lee 2003-08-04 . chapter 3Returning a loved favour :)
Really nicely done.
I hope to read more and hope that you'll look at some of my other fics up here *smiles*
Take care |
 Ishuzu 2003-07-28 . chapter 1I wasn't able to read your fic because I don't really watch much X-Men: Evolution but I just wanted to thank you for your review of my Kurt/Rogue story, Only to be with You...
Anyway, I just wanted to say thanks, you read my story for what it's worth and gave me a pleasent review ^^ . You were very kind and I hope you continue to read my story as I will probably update it soon. |
 heath 999 2003-07-22 . chapter 3Good chapter! |
 britt 2003-07-04 . chapter 1 hey way to build up the suspense =) |
 Leon 2003-07-03 . chapter 2 I think your story is very good. I like it alot and i don't like many things. ;D |
 heath 999 2003-06-03 . chapter 2Cool chapter! What's Darrien going to do now? |
 Dreams of Magic 2003-06-03 . chapter 2 ... That was cool. Especially how you make Jake's power manifest. It would be fun to read when Jake goes to Bayville. Though, not sure if he'll fit in the X-men, sounds like a Brotherhood member. |
 heath 999 2003-05-26 . chapter 1Interesting start to the story! What's going to happen to him? |