I really like this! I hope you update soon...it seems like its been a while! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

Had I read a story that was SUPPOSED to be cliched and Mary-Sue like I could look no farther. Please, find a plot, some characterization and at least some resemblance to canon! Your grammar/spelling is mostly fine, which is a relief, but your Spanish is almost unbearable in its complete lack of sense or plot assistance.
~Caremel

...ah... i liked the beginning... but i dunno... i was kinda ddisappointed in the end...
i think the end farted, n_n, but it was good as usual... YAY! Chrisie is awake again! *celebrates* i just hope slytherin doesn't pull another stunt like that or i'll kick ALL their damn asses! GR! hunt them all down and BURN them! I look forward to the next chapter! n_n! revengerevengerevengerevengerevenge

WAUGH! I F-F-FEEL SO BAD! WAUGH! * sniff* i almost cried! this was so sad... it makes me wanna kick someone's **... *flint* cough*flint* Good job... I really look forward to an update, and hopfully a happier day! *winks* great job!

WHOA! Oi! Christina shouldn't be so sad! T.T it really brings ppl down! lol, anyway... YEAH! QUIDDITCH! AWESOME! I CAN'T WAIT UNTIL THAT! If I were there i'd be screaming my bloody head off... you make me feel like i'm in the story... so...i'd probably get on probabtion from screaming at the computer... 'GO HARRY GO!' 'THAT WAS A CHEAP SHOT MARCUS!' 'I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE!' 'SHOOT CHRISTINA!' y'know stuff like that..

i'll be breif seeing i have to get up at 5 some odd in the morning and i do need to be awake for first period. so. 1, yours is one of the best _/oliver stories i beleive i have ever read. B, if she is really so bothered by it(which i have no doubt she is. nearly being raped can do that to you) take it up with McGonagall. she is the head of the house and ( think . . am i right . . . ?) deputy headmistress. he could get expelled for that over here and i don't know about over there but probably expelled or put on probation and a long suspension. I, WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! i got a good grade on my spanish test. i christmas treed more than half of it. i'm really really happy about it. gimme a present here. (oh and by the way. i'll review until you're done writing, unless you reallyextremeley ** me off which is not likely to happen.) go me, go me,life's good, go me. okay did i mention . . .WRITE MORE! POST ALL READY! por favor y gracias.
AAZMANDIOUS

Hey! it me again! hahahah, you'll never get rid of me! never! muahahahah! *chokes* owie... YAY! YOU UPDATED! YES! bwahaha... *is happy* Great job! (as usual) but I liked this chapter, not for whatever reasons you might think though. This chapter was worht the wait! I just hope that the next chapter doesn't take as long to update, but i'll stay here and read this to the end...and that's quite a feat for me, (so impatient)
GREAT JOB! I expect an update soon!
JA NE!

WOW! You're wonderfull for writing!

cool, I can see the love in the air!

COOL!How smart you are! ^^; this is cool! but what's with the sleeping?

Shadowcat241 said some pretty good stuff about your fic!
So me, being the curiose cat I am decided to check it out!
i'm glad I did!

mesa like! its awesome1

Nice one...one happened to the thing i told you bout? huh? but it was still good!

Another good chapter.

THATS RIGHT! KICK MARCUS IN THE BALLS! YAY! Oh, great chapter by the way!