Wow... what an ending line...

Great story. Short but to the point, well written, and dramatic... Shame that Kevin bit the biscuit, but... I dunno... The way he died seemed Apro-po for a firefighter... Good job mate. Cheers for posting.

Dan F

I've probably read this fic before, but I thought I'd review it anyway!

Aww, Kevin died :( That's a really good little story Kaz!