I see but the reviews that there was a chapter 10? I wish it was still here, because I'd hate to see Quatre die, but that's what it looks like here. ;_;

Well, it was well written, even if I don't like the sad ending. XP Nice work indeed. ^^

Wow...I REALLY like this story. Great job! -^_^-

Don't let Quatre diee! Then Trowa will get depressed and it'll start all over again!! Have a happy ending...to some extent. *grins* Une won't be too happy with him. neither will duo, heero, wufei, definatly trowa... Maybe in the sequel tell what duo, wu, and hee-chan were doing while this was happening and how they took Quatre's depression. that's be cool. I want to know!! ^_^

AAH! YOU BETTER NOY KILL HIM AND PUT A SEQUEL AND AND and MY POOR QUATRE! WHA!

*starts claping* yeah! I loved it! i know from expericence (sadly) what depression and sucide is like, and i really think you did a good job on epressing thouses emtions in this writting! heh..me loved it!! a sequle would be nice...but i got no ideas for you for one..anyways... ja ne

PLEASE! write a sequel that was a really good story

I need a sequel! My mind can't decide for itself...too small I guess. PLEASE keep going! *PLEASE?!*

no! don't let quatre die!

glittery

i think a sequel would be great [ i've read through all chapters, just pressed the review button on the first chapter ]. the idea to do it all through trowa's point of view is good, too. and actually telling us what happened in the warehouse. the story has good details and great emotion, but the reader really needs details of events to understand everything the character is going through. :] - love, dana

Please don't let Q die... T_T

No you can't stop it there this was getting good. You should really make a sequel and put Trowa's point of view in it and what he is feeling. PLEASE continue. :)

-_- paperworks...the nightmare of all nightmare...is Quatre ever going to get better? it sux to be in so much pain and terror all the time!

A touching scene ; I hope it will do Quatre some good to cry out and be held by Trowa in that way. Quatre remains very credible and realistic.

Pretty good story but there is no explanation of what happened in the beginning... keep on writing!

aw how sad! *sniffles* Is Quatre going to heal now? I hope so...update!