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| Mousery 2006-09-15 ch 9,  | abuseI see but the reviews that there was a chapter 10? I wish it was still here, because I'd hate to see Quatre die, but that's what it looks like here. ;_; Well, it was well written, even if I don't like the sad ending. XP Nice work indeed. ^^ |
| Cross D'Aubigne 2003-12-29 ch 9, | abuseWow...I REALLY like this story. Great job! -^_^- |
| Michelle 2003-07-06 ch 10, anon. | abuseDon't let Quatre diee! Then Trowa will get depressed and it'll start all over again!! Have a happy ending...to some extent. *grins* Une won't be too happy with him. neither will duo, heero, wufei, definatly trowa... Maybe in the sequel tell what duo, wu, and hee-chan were doing while this was happening and how they took Quatre's depression. that's be cool. I want to know!! ^_^ |
| Sleepstar 2003-06-29 ch 10, | abuseAAH! YOU BETTER NOY KILL HIM AND PUT A SEQUEL AND AND and MY POOR QUATRE! WHA! |
| Lady Ezri 2003-06-22 ch 10, | abuse*starts claping* yeah! I loved it! i know from expericence (sadly) what depression and sucide is like, and i really think you did a good job on epressing thouses emtions in this writting! heh..me loved it!! a sequle would be nice...but i got no ideas for you for one..anyways... ja ne |
| areka hakai 2003-06-17 ch 10, | abusePLEASE! write a sequel that was a really good story |
| Tini-angel 2003-06-17 ch 10, | abuseI need a sequel! My mind can't decide for itself...too small I guess. PLEASE keep going! *PLEASE?!* |
| glitterynile 2003-06-15 ch 10, | abuseno! don't let quatre die! glittery |
| SPACEheart04 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abusei think a sequel would be great [ i've read through all chapters, just pressed the review button on the first chapter ]. the idea to do it all through trowa's point of view is good, too. and actually telling us what happened in the warehouse. the story has good details and great emotion, but the reader really needs details of events to understand everything the character is going through. :] - love, dana |
| Cyan 2003-06-14 ch 10, anon. | abusePlease don't let Q die... T_T |
| Venus 2003-06-14 ch 10, anon. | abuseNo you can't stop it there this was getting good. You should really make a sequel and put Trowa's point of view in it and what he is feeling. PLEASE continue. :) |
| Schizo13 2003-06-09 ch 5, | abuse-_- paperworks...the nightmare of all nightmare...is Quatre ever going to get better? it sux to be in so much pain and terror all the time! |
| Misura 2003-06-04 ch 4, | abuseA touching scene ; I hope it will do Quatre some good to cry out and be held by Trowa in that way. Quatre remains very credible and realistic. |
| vivi 2003-06-02 ch 4, anon. | abusePretty good story but there is no explanation of what happened in the beginning... keep on writing! |
| Schizo13 2003-06-02 ch 4, | abuseaw how sad! *sniffles* Is Quatre going to heal now? I hope so...update! |