this is good and i'd like to see more, but if you're concentrating on finishing just one story still i'd really like to see more added to In The End because its definately my favourite

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Lol, sorry this Author note...
AUTHOR'S NOTE: like i said...these stories do suck, they are meant just to be an escape of my strange random thoughts about other characters...My real writings that i check over and over and over again, and are acctually pretty good (getting progressively better) are on FictionPress.Com. w.fictionpress.com, my User name is Trapped_Bird, please if you have the time and you want to see what my writing is really like, check it out
I left it in the reviews of my story.
PS- Do you really think good authors emerge from screwing around with other author's characters..no. I just do it for the hell of it when i'm bored. The only way you can GET ANYWHERE is to make something original. So that's Why FanFiction is just something silly for fun. And why Fictionpress is more real...

o! skool!! update!! now!! yay!! lol

cliff hager i want/ *need* more plz

Cool Story so far. I love it. I cannot wait for more. Add more As Soon As Possible.

TTSS: *is in a huge pool* i am drowning in the detail!! see *goes under water and lifeguards pull her* absolutly drowning!

thats good I like nice and long chapters, though i can't seem to write one... ah, well keep updating. ^.^

Hey,
nice story. You got to update soon okay and thanks for reviewing my story

woo hoo another chappie! well i wanted 2 see his reaction...i think he took it pretty well,lol. Well keep up w/ the long chapters cuz it bugs me so much when someone updates and it's a short chapter, especially if it's a story like this one (meaning a fanfic i really like and don't wanna stop reading) well keep up w/ the good writing and update soon pleez!

good first chappie!! can't wait 2 read the 2nd chapter, i wanna c wat draco will think 'bout gin. kepp writing!

Update! Update! Update!

greaty!! UPDATE!! im hooked now i need to know whats gonna happen.

Yay!! I liked that alot I hope there is some action soon!! I really liked it thought good writing skills! Update Soon!

~americasweetie~

Oh la la! Has potential! Nice plot so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more! Thanks for reviewing my story, btw. :)

i want an update! please, this is great!