I LOVED THIS. It was so, so, so them. Ayame's ramblings and his mature, adult side that Yuki so rarely sees... I love how he was able to take control of the car so calmly, so quickly. And how the two brothers were able to sort of, hm, see eye to eye? At least a little bit better. And the end, where Yuki can't stand Ayame being silent and just demands the story anyway. SO, SO, SO GOOD. We need more Ayame/Yuki brotherly interaction fics.

Everything about your story is perfect except for one thing: it's confusing how Yuki suddenly brings up the heat.

I love your work! This is excellent. You portrayed the characters exceptionally well.

Wow. I really loved this. This was great- you captured Ayame and Yuki's relationship perfectly. And that is no easy feat, so kudos to you!
Beautifully written, and very descriptive- a truly wonderfully written fanfiction!

Keep up the amazing work!

- LOSGAP =D

I love the part where Yuki is planning to kill Shigure! Ayame is a little OOC but it works. I love it!

I loved this! The characters were spot on and your spelling and grammar is great (THANK YOU for that, by the way). And I love the song you referenced haha. Great job!

Aww, how cute! Ayame rules!

This was such a cute/sweet/funny story! Everyone was so in character and I do adore the 'brotherly bond' of Ayame and Yuki.

how cute, they're really getting close and I can really see this happening
^^

this is pretty good, could you make it longer? Include the rest of the weekend at the hotsprings and maybe the trip home.

aww beautiful story!

Yay! Thank you for such a wonderful story. :)

This is really a lovely story. The interaction between Yuki and Ayame is perfect, and the ending shows the same warm hope that the manga does for the two of them. Thanks for sharing it. :)

Kawaii! ^^ Not only is it well-written, it stays incredibly IC! XD Amusing, too, though the explanation for the trip is a bit shaky. XP

Pretty darn good. Amusing, very IC, and nicely balanced (as in very, very small) fluff.

Ahahhaa! I love it! This is really old though! From like 2003! I can see how popular it is though! HAha 43 reviews! Awesome! I loved it! You wrote it really in character. I loved the 'saving the marching band' part especially. Dude, this is one of my favorite stories EVER!

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