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| Historianic 2008-01-27 ch 23,  | abusePlease, please, please continue with this. You've done such a great job of it so far, you simply can't leave it unfinished. I've really loved reading this story; you've got a great handle on characterisation and plot development. More importantly, you've got your reader emotionally engaged and that means you've got their attention. I care about what happens to these characters and I want to know what happens to them. Please, continue writing this story. |
| bla601 2008-01-06 ch 23, | abuseplease hurry andget the next chapters up i am so wondering what happens next |
| princetongirl 2007-03-03 ch 23, | abuseloved it update soon |
| Amythest Girl 2007-02-22 ch 23, | abuseBeautiful name and Terrific story! I know you haven't updated in a while, but do you think maybe you could. Because I really want to know what happens,lol. Great Story! Update Soon, Amythest Girl. |
| princesscatie21 2007-01-10 ch 23, | abuseaw so adorable! and i completely love the name! this is amazing and fantastic and i dont know, something else really good, lol. great job, write more soon!! |
| shanelover89 2006-12-27 ch 23, | abuseI love that name! Anyway, I can't wait for her to have the baby, and I hope everything turns out in the end! Please update soon! Keep writing, Lorah :) |
| Kokoro-and-Rei 2006-12-14 ch 1, | abusePlease continue with this! I noticed it's been about three years since you began it, but it's a wonderful story. I'd love to see it finished. |
| princetongirl 2006-12-04 ch 22, | abuseloved it update soon |
| shanelover89 2006-11-30 ch 22, | abuseGreat chapter, really. It was so emotionally charged...absolutely fantastic. Please update soon! Keep writing, Lorah :) |
| jeytonlover 2006-11-27 ch 21, | abuseExcellent chapter! I love the way you convey their emotions so well. I hope you'll update soon, I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| OTHlover04 2006-11-25 ch 21, | abusethat was good |
| shanelover89 2006-11-21 ch 21, | abuseWow...I LOVED this chapter!! Please update soon! Keep writing, Lorah :) |
| OTHlover04 2006-11-21 ch 20, | abusethis is great! :) |
| princetongirl 2006-11-18 ch 20, | abuseloved it update soon |
| jeytonlover 2006-11-14 ch 20, | abuseSo sweet! You write the characters just like we think they would be if this were to happen in a sequal or something! I love this story and I can't wait to see what happens next! Update soon! |