Aww man. That was like a cliff-hanger. I am REALLY interested in how this is all going to work out.

Hermione = Evil? Hmm... Very interesting. And I kind of hope Ron stops acting like a git and becomes Harry's friend again... Kind of. Hehe.

I think that it is super funny that Harry attacks Draco with bites (which is more intimidating) while Draco uses... kisses. Hehe. I find it incredibly amusing. What happened to that psycho-Veela stuff that included beaks? ...Then again, Draco wouldn't look too hot with a beak...

Very interesting (and hot) tale by the way. You have grabbed my attention.

And Ron... well, he is just mean. (not a very detailed opinion, but yeah)

good

I like your story very much:) But I have a favor though, the '101 Tricks and Advantages to being a Veela', could you possibly send it to me please? I am very intellagent and would like to write one of my own-actually i already have one on paper but i'm stuck on the second chapter where I have a book just like yours that is given to Dragon aka Draco, so he could read it but all I came up with was that when they fall alseep over night they grow a pair of wings and a tail. When they find their mate their wings would glow softly and I just can't come up with anything else.

I would like too, with your permission and help to make the book more of a thing were both he and Harry read it.

I would really like it if you would and i would try to upload my story as soon as I can once I come back after a three day vaction. Thanks alot!:) I'll be sending you another you another one soon! Thanks ^^:) if not I won't blame you.

Well... I honestly have to say. You have a potential for a very good story. (And I'm not trying to be biased since I wrote a VampireHarry/VeelaDraco story myself.

Honestly, I skimmed over the story a bit and felt the need to just give my opinion if that's okay. I think this story could be absolutely wonderful without a shadow of a doubt if you tweaked it a little more. Maybe drag the plot along just a tad more. In conjuction with that, maybe don't explain what's going on in the story with author notes in parantheses. Work it into the story... like 'Harry knew Hermione was genuine because giving ones word as a witch or wizard was a serious bond and the consequences for breaking such a bond would be dire.' Something like that.

Other then that, you write very well, grammar is excellent, you seem like an intelligent writer. So, maybe develop your plot a little farther and I think your good story would be absolutely great!

I hope you didn't take anything to offense. I rarely review anything myself, which I need to stop (Slythindor: You can't help it if you're a lazy bum). (looks at him) Do you have to interrupt everything I say!

Anyway, keep up the good work.

its ok so far i didnt know wat was happening at first

eww... gay kissing. Sorry i have nothing against gays but harry and draco? jeez, get a life

plz update soon i cant wait ur good

WHAT THE ** WAS THAT.AW,I LIKE IT WHEN HERMIONE IS NICE AND FATHER DAUGHTER MY **,EW THAT WAS GROSS. WHY DID YO HAVE TO MESS IT UP.not trying to be mean but that was so wierd. and not fair, harry has been through so much, please let ron stay true latter on or hermione be a double agent. please

oh my ogd. i love this story, i just wish the chapters were longer. it really has the patencial to be a real book if it wanted to. if you can't make them longer or don't wan't to i really hope it ends up with a lot of chapters,also if felt a little rushed, but still good.


liachan

PS. i hate creed but i cheacked it out and that song does fit, well done XD

I like your story thus far but I thank you for the update and look forward to the next one. It is kinda of amusing that Harry is a little dense at the moment. Why during the kiss in the hall did Draco realize, would he not have found out before? I look forward to the next interaction between Draco and Harry. Take care and Blessed Be.

I was wondering when you're going to update?

Wow, this is a good story, I hope to read more of it soon, thank you for it.

Tsk! Tsk! Lack of updates and breaking promises! You're headed towards a life of sin. At least according to the fanfic bible. But then again I haven't checked my account in over six months so I suppose I am no better. '^_^ Anywayz update!

love the twist in this story! keep writing!