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cooltrainer 124
2009-01-25 . chapter 5
when the update?!?! it's a really good story... I like the interaction between them... haruka in bikini... XD
the conversation between Harukan and her mother... well... maybe if you put the translation...

anyway I hope to hear of you soon (:

Atte

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zaza
2008-12-18 . chapter 5
hi Iam a malaysian I think you should at least learn the proper words before you actually use it. you make the malay language sounds bad here . I hope you consult those who usualy use the language before writing using them.overall I hope you write more...
amaramichelle
2008-12-02 . chapter 5
way cool story loved the pool scene and the idea of a pet how bout a yellow lab cant wait to read the rest
Clara Luna Johansen
2008-09-13 . chapter 5
Hi! Love Haruka and Michiru, love this fic. Write more. Pretty please with sugar on top?
JoJo
2008-07-30 . chapter 5
You got me HOOKED!
Very good stuff!
Haruka-Michiru
2008-07-28 . chapter 5
Awesome chapter, as usual. :)
krugern
2008-07-27 . chapter 5
Cute chapter. Liked the interaction between Michi and Ruka when Ruka was asking her to go with her to visit her family. Look forward to the next chapter.
jade-MEST
2008-07-27 . chapter 5
si no me equivoco fue éste el ultimo capítulo que habías publicado de esta historia... asi que después de tan larga espera merecemos un nuevo capítulo! ya estoy ansiosa esperando la una nueva actualización... me encanta esta historia, ojalá todo vaya bien durante sus vacaciones y puedan confesarse lo que sienten.

Saludos desde Chile
Vanessa Riverton
2008-07-27 . chapter 5
Another great chapter - cannot wait for more! It's really picking up the pace now!

-VR
j-belle
2008-07-27 . chapter 4
You should definitely try to fight that penchant!

This is just a delight. I can't wait for the next chapter!
YinYangTwin1
2008-06-24 . chapter 4
Hmm. I wonder whats got Michiru down in the dumps (punders) O well I guess I'll find out soon huh. Great chapter by the way. I liked how you made Haruka oblivious to all the attention she was recieving
Haruka-Michiru
2008-06-24 . chapter 4
Woo! An update! :) Awesome chapter!
LitaDelacour
2008-06-23 . chapter 4
my curiousity got the best of me. i'm loving this. they are hoplessly in love with eachother,but won't admit it. i would go for a yellow lad puppy or a kitten.

Amara
Sif Ivaldi
2008-06-23 . chapter 4
I love this chapter! Never thought that Haruka would wear a bikini! And score for Usagi! She got Michiru real good! By the way can't imagine with a pug either! Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope to see you soon!
impersonal
2008-06-23 . chapter 4
A pet for Michiru?! LOL i would love to see how she would react to a pet. Nice pool scene. Update soon!
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