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| australian-girlfriend 2003-12-17 ch 1, | abusetoo stupid. too confusing. I want more. |
| unq-strfsh 2003-11-26 ch 1, | abuseLOL...that was...weird...in a GOOD way, of course! ^_^ |
| The Ace of Authors 2003-05-27 ch 1, | abuseright...Check out my story if you wanna laugh, I do jokes right. -Peace easy! |
| Kattran 2003-05-27 ch 1, | abuseI was just flipping around and came across your new story. I'm proud to be the first one or may somebody already posted a review and it hasn't came up yet. Oh...wel...anyway, I liked it. It wasn't confusing at all. You used an episode as the basis of the chapter. I've seen that episode like a billion and an half times. I know it is a exaggertation, but you know what I mean. Anyway, keep up with the story. I want to know where Chi-chi came out of and p[ost your other stories. Great work! |
| Mikeol 2003-05-27 ch 1, | abuseUm... that was pretty weird. I'll say this: I wouldn't want to be part of one of your dreams! Interesting story, but I don't know what happend. |