I read this a long time ago... still so good when i read it now. You capture their relationship very well! It's so dramatic and heartwrenching!

Sigh.. Beautiful. Very beautiful. I LOVE YOUR FANFIC!

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i really like it. I've only read a couple of the volumes of BOTI but i loved it and i really did like Anotsu. I think you potray him and makie very well here.

Very well done. The sorrow of Makie and Anotsu is fully captured right here into the passages! Awesome! I'm looking forward to your next story!

I know nothing about this anime. But this was sad. It sounds like lost love.

I know nothing about this anime. But this was sad. It sounds like lost love.

Pay more attention to grammar in your work.

Beautiful. I'm planning on writing a A BOI fic... this might sound bizzare, but Anotsu and Rin...?

I was so amazed to find fan fiction for this manga series! - I LOVE this manga! - Only twenty pages of Dreamsong, and I loved it! I love this fic, too! Geezum, he saved Makie from the whorehouse but she became a geisha anyways...- Marvelous fic! I'd love to write a Blade of the Immortal fic, but seeing as I've only read twenty pages of one book, I wouldn't do very well...*sigh*

Great story. Always thought that Antosu and Makie were right for one another, but they didnt say it out loud. (The part before Antosu got married, he thought abt Makie and got his pple to look for her.) Really interesting for the 50 dogs reference :), great addition to Samura's plot. Pls do continue writing more! :)

totally ANGST! *breaks down* bastard, Anotsu. But we already knew that, didn't we? Damn, I haven't read all of the Blade of the Immortals stuff *grumble stupid Dark Horse... translating so slowly* but I HAVE read Dreamsong. You do the characters justice kcc. I look forward to your next fic.