*sniffles*
so beautiful!!

reminds me of Shuya from manga BattleRoyale...so emotional...
Harry...being too hopeful and trusting he failed to notice, or to "give" notice to the certain fact that it was his relationship that's causing all the problems...always hping for that nice day when they will "learn to fly" not considering it might never happen...

sad...very sad...*sigh*

ahhrrg! DRACO MALFOY ADMIT IT!
before you lose Harry, let go of your denial!

what senario is worse than that? the two person you fell inlove with are dating each other! damn...i pity Ron...

(nice story...how old are you?)

OH MY GOD! This is SUCH a good fic! Holy crap, you are DEEP, woman! This is SO fabulous! I LOVED IT!

Woah! Ron is in love the Harry and Draco. Hermione is in love with Harry. Draco cannot admit he's in love with Harry. And Harry is just... oh my! Does Hermione survive? Does she talk with Harry? Will Draco ever admit he's in love with Harry? And what of Ron? That boy and his thoughts scare me. He loves them and he hates them. He wants them and he wants them dead. Psycho!

wow. that was amazing. I'm crying.

Your imagery is amazing, and the language you use is fantastic!
Write more!

Scarlett xx

actually, (something)elf (sorry i've forgotten your name in the last 10 seconds), ron's the one i felt most sorry for out of all of them. when you look at it, hermione got her release, and harry and draco have each other - but ron...poor thing, he feels (and physically is) completely and utterly alone. how can you hate the guy?

~sigh~. i dont understand how this wasn't nearly as well written as your other fanfics, but this is the one that's forced tears from my eyes. hopelessly heart-wrenching w/an optimistic twist. that's got to be one of the most difficult combination to pull off, but i must say, you've done it spectacularly.

Oh gods... I really loved this story. One thing I liked was that even though it was telling about the character's points of view, it still had a bit of a plot. And the ANGST! Oh, my, the angst. I love angsty stories. *claps* Good work. This will be the THIRD story of yours that goes on my 'favorites' list. ^.^

-Eclipsed
(who is still jealous)

Oh my god that was so beautiful I love this story. You are truly talented. i love the way you have portrayed them in such a touching way. This has cemented my hate for Ron and my love for harry and Draco and my liking for Hermione. *grins* be proud. It was so sad cos it was obvious it was Ron or killed her or set her up to be killed *sets a lynch party on Ron*I love all your work and am going straight to read your other stories.
Thanks muchly for the reviews on Violin and on resurrection. *huggles*

props G

hey Vivica,
is she hot? yes she is! lay off the darkness! write something humorous!
joking, your piece is great!
love the description and emotion. very poetic. keep writing, my darling!
Sarah D.

(y) you're a great writer, keep up the good work.