|Reviews for Broken|
| kirallie 10/5/05 . chapter 8
Is that the end? Hope not!
| Alley Parker 7/15/05 . chapter 8
PMG! THAT WAS ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!
| Alley Parker 7/15/05 . chapter 7
I'm totally lovin this!
Is it kinda like a montage?
| Alley Parker 7/15/05 . chapter 5
I still love it.
But i just didn't get the first part...
| Alley Parker 7/15/05 . chapter 3
This is really good and really well writen!
But the transfer from chapter 2 to 3 was kinda confusing. I mean first Obi-Wan and Anakin are dueling and then Obi-Wan is alone...?
| BrIdGeTtE 12/31/04 . chapter 8
that was amazing... the back and forth was just, the whole thing was great
| Renee 7/21/03 . chapter 8
More please! This so good!
| ewan's girl 7/20/03 . chapter 8
Wow...all I can say is wow (for lack of better words). This is probably one of the best stories I have ever read on here. This last chapter had me on the brink of tears. Wow.
| obiwan84 7/20/03 . chapter 1
Crap. I'm sick of all of this storytelling that indicated that the only reason Obi-Wan survives is because Anakin is merciful to him in the end. Crap. Anakin is a petulant, selfish and self-observed. Not to mention a creepy stalker of women.
| Charlotte1 7/15/03 . chapter 7
The most amazing stories never get enough reviews, yours deserves hundreds! It is by far the best piece of writing that I have read here, you really have a wonderful way with words! Keep up the amazing work!
| Linari Tanis 6/23/03 . chapter 6
This is a great story! You have to great talent in using detail to make the reader picture exactly what you want. This is wonderful! More! _
| ewan's girl 6/21/03 . chapter 6
This is I have to admit the best prediction of this duel I have read up to date. You have captured the intensity and emotions of this fight. I seriously cannot wait to see how Lucas handles this duel, but he should take a tip from your story.
| Sophita 6/17/03 . chapter 4
Well done; it's hard to keep a battle scene going and keeping the tension up and you have managed to do so. I must say I like your Obi better than most fanfic Obi's I've seen; he acts very much in character and is a stronger character than many portray him. _; Good job so far, keep it up!
| ewan's girl 6/17/03 . chapter 4
I seriously cannot find the words to describe how amazing that chapter was. I cannot wait for this duel between these two, it will be so emotional, and you've captured the tone of this duel very well. Keep it comming. Although maybe I'm mistaken, but I think chapter 2 and 3 are mixed up and should be switched.
| ewan's girl 6/8/03 . chapter 3
This story is so well written. I love the idea that the setting for lets face it the greatest star wars duel (cause it will be) is back in Theed. This chapter was so emotionally wonderful, keep up the great work.