 lolmeh 2008-08-19 . chapter 1 How can this have DH spoilers if it was last updated in '06? Have we got an insid source, hm? |
 %£%$^%*$ 2007-02-01 . chapter 13 whats with all the vulgarity, why is all your characters do is sleep around, they have sex or toss one another off like atleast 8 times a chapter, what the hell, they are far to open confidence is good, but this is to far, plus when your writing you should do far more gaps and paragraphs its to stuck together, so that when i'm reading it it just seems to merge together (sounds dumb) but it's because of the lack of spaces and gaps ect. stop with all the sex, i know this story is M but give it a bloody break, i've only really finished reading chapter 13 but there is just far to much sex, i mean its like all you write, can't you just write the story withought so much of it, its like your writing the story around that, and its bloody annoying! |
 Nicole Black 2006-08-28 . chapter 108I do hope you keep writing. |
 Cathy-Ann 2006-02-25 . chapter 108So is harry permanently dead or will he come back... |
 Cathy-Ann 2005-10-07 . chapter 106a couple pf ,pre a,bished ans the stroy will run out of charactyers to kill off, save for the m,uggles when thw wizards gets their mugle hunting licenses.
then when they invade the usa, we can set off thwe nikes and no one will be left alive. |
 tired of long ass stories 2005-08-28 . chapter 105 any DAY now you'll finish the story. i mean, a hundred and five chapters? what're you HIGH? this is obviously not going anywhere so just wrap up the "plot' and finish it already! |
 Jalani 2005-08-28 . chapter 105
There's a lot of killing, isn't there? |
 ashleyk 2005-05-02 . chapter 29 i love it but to much hell for the trio cant somthing bad happen to malfoy |
 Cathy-Ann 2005-04-16 . chapter 104let me guess. fawkes tears hit harry and ron and as it takes effect after they have slide into the viel, they are alive and then exit the veil.
Then they gran voldemort and toss him into the veil. |
 Angel.of.Blood 2005-04-08 . chapter 103 DON'T YOU DARE TO NOT FINISH THIS STORY! NOW I WANT TO READ THE WHOLE THING!*please* |
 nightmare2373 2005-02-13 . chapter 101 its over six hundred thousand words and the last few chapters have been very similar please please please get to the end SOON |
 JEKrug01 2005-02-12 . chapter 101Ah, finally getting somewhere at last (or at least trying to).
I liked the last chapter, where some progress in getting Harry's name cleared was being made at last! God, this roller-coaster of Blame-Harry-for-everything-that's-wrong-in-the-world mess was really beginning to sound quite repetetive and boring.
In any case, this chapter is raising a few eyebrows over with me. Are we back to blaming Harry for every murder on Earth again, and keeping him on the run to boot? I would suggest a bit more progress in clearing him than `Clear Him, then frame him' or just `Frame him, let him and his group get framed for everything'
And is it my imagination or is Hogwarts declaring independence from the rest of the world? Wouldn't make much sense since you only got a small minority inside trying to help clear Harry. |
 Juline 2005-02-09 . chapter 100I've been reading this story for a long time and I cannot tell you how happy I am that they're finally being vindicated. Does this this mean the story is nearly over? I was wondering how much longer it could get. This is one of the longest stories I know on here and most others get boring or stupid or I lose interest at some point, but not this one.
I don't usually review to stories because I never know what to say, but I felt that I needed to tell you how wonderful this story is and to take all the time you need to get the next chapter up. You post much faster and more regularly than most other authors and write about 10x longer chapters, so don't feel rushed to get the next one out. We all know that you have a life and lots of other things to do. Thank you for sharing all your wonderful work with us. |
 Cathy-Ann 2005-02-09 . chapter 100Well it is getting obvious that Victor Fallershiem is a CROOKED politician.
Next up, knowck him off or expose him or track his money and where is comes from. |
 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1-BLAST-OFF 2005-01-01 . chapter 1 dude, great plot BUT verb tense is TERRIBLE ugh ... (*pulls hair out in agony and sadness at such a great fic being destroyed through bad grammer*)... GET A BETA or a frikin book on grammer... you can still write a story minute by minute as if it is happening in the present TIME BUT when you write it you still use past tense... please fix this for my sanity. I can't continue reading it even though I REALLY want to.. |