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| Foolish Mortal 2005-12-06 ch 1,  | abuseI really love the description you did for Vash, I could picture it perfectly |
| StrawberryCream 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseLovely. Simply lovely. I can't think of any other words to describe it. You turn the simple moments into treasured ones - something special. It's so very cool. |
| Shannon Holmes 2003-06-25 ch 1, | abuseThat was a badass story. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Blessed be |
| celestialfloret 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is such a sweet story. You capture Vashes emtional range; his serene, serious side and his life loving side. Congrat, you did an awesome job! |
| Demon Squirrel 2003-05-30 ch 1, | abusewow... i like how u brought an event as rare as rain into the dusty planet of trigun. that was a really good story. ::two thumbs up:: |
| Nandelin 2003-05-30 ch 1, | abuseThis was a really great fic. I could just imagine this happening. |
| Becky 2003-05-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat a cool story. Good Job! |
| Enid Coslaw 2003-05-29 ch 1, | abuseRargh on you!! You ruined my shounen-ai ending there with Wolfwood tossing Milly around...pft..shoulda been Vash Couldn't agree more with 'Clinesterton Beademung'; this fic is like a long needed rain on the parched content of the fandom, especially for its eloquence. I actually don't think you have any problems portraying Wolfie..all you really needed to show was his shock and awe at what Vash reveals about himself little by little. +fav story peace ^^. |
| Kd Zeal 2003-05-29 ch 1, | abuseOh! Good!! Hehe, I'd forgotten they wouldn't have seen rain... A very good story, with nice discription, you got the atmosphere perfect. |
| Clinesterton Beademung 2003-05-29 ch 1, | abuseY'know, this little vignette is a welcome and pleasant surprise. Your writing is strong and confident, without the annoying spelling and grammatical errors too many writers on ffnet don't bother correcting. My only real criticism is that although the story is told from Wolfwood's point of view, I don't get a *strong* sense of his character. But no matter; this minor shortcoming doesn't affect your careful description and scene-setting. You're on my Favorites list as of right now. I'm looking forward to more! |
| Sagan Fox 2003-05-29 ch 1, | abuseAww! Love it love it love it! Your writing is superb, and I love how you infuse the story with magic. This is a wonderful little slice of the Trigun universe! |