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Reviews For: Tomaru

Azamiko 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseI like the maturing of the characters. It seems like a good progression after the third movie.
Ryoko-SP 2006-10-22 ch 1,	abuseWow... It's was so Cute and Funny!! Congratz!!
xforgottenxcrystalxdestinyx 2006-07-08 ch 1,	abuseOMFG!OMFG!OMFG!OMGF!THAT WAS F*G BEAUTIFUL. So much emotion. It was unspeakable. The romance was just so beautiful. Words can't describe the way that you have written this story and the ending was just breath taking! ABSOLUTELY HEART STOPPING. Tears fell from my eyes as i read the last 3 paragraphs and i'm being deadly serious! Well done you are a unique writer who has out done her self with writing a story with so much fire and passion.
Mrs. Taty Himura 12 2006-02-11 ch 1,	abuseAWW! This is such a romantic story! I loved it!
rurouni madness-battousai o... 2006-02-07 ch 1,	abuseI swear that that had to be the best fanfiction that I've read in at least a year! It was so sweet! You should really think about becoming a professional writer! -rm/bo
Starhopper 2004-08-24 ch 1,	abuseMy heart is so light like your writing style. I felt like I was floating the enitre time I was reading this. You are a truly wonderful writer to have captured such a sweet declaration. Writing in the tiles? How subtle and extremely deep and perfectly befitting for the oneshot you authored. I loved it and onto the favorites list it goes. Starhopper
Marik_K 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon.	abuseAn truly beautiful and poignant story, I applaud and commend you on proving that there are still some authors out there that can turn out a decent story. claps. Spelling, grammar, punctuation, everything is just perfect.
Usako-chan 2003-05-30 ch 1,	abuseI've read this somewhere before. Where did you post this before? I swear, I love it just as much as I did before. You wrote the Marmalade Boy fics to where my breath caught in my throat and now here you are doing it again. I really like Ryoko/Tenchi pairings, since I know they belong together. It's obvious after the last movie. Wonderful fic.
hotel california 2003-05-29 ch 1,	abuseBravo! It's so good I was hooked by the second sentence ^-^
Lil_Ryoko317 2003-05-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThis is probably one of the best fics I've ever read. Keep it up.
Diane Long 2003-05-29 ch 1,	abuseThat was just breath-taking. Sometimes the romantics in the Tenchi fanfic world go to great lengths to construct situations that will bring Tenchi and Ryoko to the moment you have written about. The great moment when the masks are dropped (in your case figuratively amd literally) and hearts are revealed in confession and that first tenuous kiss. That you come directly to this moment with such power and elegant simplicity makes a strong impact on the reader. I enjoyed this very much and look forward to other fics by you in the future. Di
dj azn gyrl 2003-05-29 ch 1,	abusethat ryoko is always jumping to conclusions... that was good! i'm a ayeka fan, but i like ryoko too... i hope you write more soon!

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