oh i like tobias too ^_^ him and Marco! i love Marco. But i havent seen many fans of him...neways
u werent exactly 'Marco' himself but u did come pretty close! and thats good enough! [i read the whole fic btw] and i loved ur Visser One entry too. It was cool, written perfectly

im sorry i couldnt review earlier but i just recently decided to visit the animoprhs section (i've read the books siince i was 12 or 13 but now i go into the fanfiction section...when i'm 15 -_-)

but my computer was acting like a drunk or something -.- neeways so great fic! * sniff * made me cry too at some points...

~*~Faith Kaiba~*~

Wow! All of these were so sweet and so sad! I loved Tobias's...

OMG! This is so sad and so beautifully written at the same time. I cried all the way through it. Beautiful!

There's a lot of emotional impact in this fic - the sad acceptance and resignation do wonders for it. It's depressing but in a well-written way. I enjoyed it. Congrats.

PS: I think it's okay the chapter wasn't Cassie-centric. Besides, Jake and Cassie DID break up. It's more fitting that Jake focused on Rachel...and that he gave Cassie some credit, too.

Wow.

God, this was so much like Jake at the end of the series -- desperate, depressed, beaten, broken...but still with a bastion of hope deep inside. In a way, his "speech" at the end makes me think of a eulogy for Rachel. How fitting that Jake was the one who gave it. =)
I like that Jake matured enough to realize that war WASN'T, ISN'T black-and-white, but there are still things worth fighting for. I liked that.
I like too, that Jake is trying to redeem himself...though I don't know if Jake realizes the only way he can TRULY redeem is if he forgives himself. I always felt that's what was kind of hopeless in Jake's crusade in 54, but hell if I know. And you made me actually feel hopeful about the end of #54 (which is an accomplishment!) -- and I LOVE the way you tied that last line to the title of the book. That simply rocked.

PS: And I'm gonna beg again -- could I please oh please put this fic on my fanfic site? (http://w.super-hero.net/sog) Just email me and tell me yes or no.

this was very good and touched me very much. i loved it! it was also very sad and depressing. ilike the way you realy got into the charectors minds. if you stuck this at the back of book 54 i wouldn't be able to tell the difference between your writing and K.A's.

Checkmate? As in the game is over, as in COMPLETELY over, now? Whoa.

I'm guessing this is because of Rachel, isn't it? That's pretty cool in a sad kind of way. But, anyway, I like this chapter -- especially the idea that the Ellimist has learned from the humans...I always had that feeling about him, too. Awesome. And, of course, the comparision to God and the Devil was pretty interesting...I've seen that on some Anti-Animorphs sites, where they were blasting KAA because the "God" character was imperfect, more or less. Made me angry, that did. **growls**

B-ut, I've gotten way off-topic. The only suggestion I can give you for Jake's chapter would be to, of course, mention Cassie somehow. Aside from that, I can't wait 'til this ends! But, man, I'm gonna be sad -- this has been a good series.

*stares at screen with mouth hanging wide open* Nope, I'm not catching flies. This chapter was...indescribable. It was so...awesome. So...real, in effect. I mean, absolutely perfect. I mean...wow. I'll be looking forward to your next chapter!

ok, if i hadn't said it before- you are a very good writer- possibly better than i. however, i enjoy you stories very much

I like it.
Really liked the way Tobias compared himself to Rachel -- that just *fit*. Seemed so much like him.
And I like that Tobias has grown up enough to realize he really ISN'T a freak, just different. Something new. Or as the Ellimist would've said, a beginning. =)
THAT was probably my favorite part, given how many times he referred to himself as a freak in the series. I liked it a lot. Maybe not my utter, total favorite, but it was good.

And I can't wait for more.

WoW.

i can't think of anything else to say. This was really REALLY really REALLY good! i am TOTALLY impressed!

thankyou.

:)

i liked that you decided to write a chapter from Visser I's perspective.

its pretty good. at first i was like- whoa! why isn't he being is old arrogant self? and then i realized that you wrote of him after he was defeated and so he's a bit depressed and deflated. so good job w/that! thanxs for making me think!

:)

*sniff* Oh why did KA have to end it? Great chapter. I so glad you finally put Tobias out.

Moon*wolf

~sniffle~ I love Tobias, and dontchu EVER think THAT again! They still your friends!
Okay, I'm done with that part now. It was good, and lotsa good Tobias thoughts in it. Especially the Rachel parts. Yeah, its sad that he's forgotten soo much. I liked the ending, too. Like Rachel. Yep... these are all super-tyme good. Better than anything I could write. (Thats true) So, update as soon as u can, okay? Cool. Lookin forward to it.