i loled so hard when draco said "You wish potter" after Harry saying something about having dracos baby. sooo funny :)

i still really like this story. just try to forget how old they are. i mean 17 right. its just so totally against all i think you should do in this situation. they are to young, Draco could die in the next three years, they are still in scool and all the other stress. in real life, i would be total against miones decision, but this is a story, so i guess, everything will go well

I already love this story. its always so cute when Draco is vulnerable and not so Malfoyish

Mehh... both of them are totally OOC, it's just SO unrealistic.

This is a good read. Dramione happened faster than I've imagined but still, its worth reading. I love Lucius' character as well as Narcissa's. Draco acted a bit ridiculous about Hermione being unfaithful; he should have known her! and Neville was still clumsy as ever! I don't read prophecy stories much except if the story can keep me interested til the very end. Congratulations on this!

THIS WAS PERFECT! Definitely topped all of the other HP stories that I have read- This story was brilliantly written and it had a perfect balance of fluffiness and bloodshed- I really enjoyed reading it I must say that I'm impressed with your capability of adding in so many people as important figures in this story- It normally comes out awkwardly or just downright stupid for others- You ought to write more stories- I'd happily read and review them Teehee

OH MY GOSH TT Definitely realistic! Huge turn in events- Omgsh the past 10 or so chapters had gotten me so ancy! AHHHH! OMG T.T How is there still 3 chapters? Well Tah for now! I need to finish this thing asap- This is insanely good w

OMG hahaa Lucius is so cruel when it comes to Pansy xD Hahahaa w

This story is full of drama, romance, adventure, deception, love, and a whole lot of other things. I want to state all of them, but I'm afraid I'll run out of space. I liked how you played with the "Love conquers all" kind of plot. It's a great story. But it's a shame that you've stopped writing. I do hope you continue writing. I'll keep this story as a favorite and wait for an update saying that you're back and writing again. I'll be more than happy to wait.

nice

absolutely loved it!

Aw! I love happy endings! :-3

I know that this story is completed but I was reading this chapter today and this is a correction I simply must tell you Fawkes is a phoenix not a falcon. thank you

Loved this fic. :D xox

This was...I have no words to describe how I feel about this story. Everything from start to finish was perfect. I laughed, cried, giggled/squealed in excitement, and had my heart stopped beating or jump into my throat numerous times. This is one of my favorite stories ever. Just...Wow!

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I admire your ambition, trying to save their love after he betrays her so awfully. And to a certain extent I understand his able acceptance of the lies of his father. It was a well wrought deception. I think Hermione could have forgiven that, perhaps, his believe that she'd abandoned him because he's never hidden his weakness from her. Ironically, it is the one brave thing he did in this fic. It's rather easy to believe no one loves you when you don't think yourself worthy of love.

However, what you've done to them with regard to the birth and babyhood of their child might be beyond the realm of redemption. It's not a matter of betrayal or forgiveness or even love. It's a matter of personal worth. Is he worthy of love, a man who rapes the mother of his child and colludes in the murder of his own son? Draco is basically condemning his own innocent baby for... what exactly? He doesn't believe in romantic love anymore because Hermione is leaving him; okay, so what? Noel is son. He's kidnapped, neglected, hated, and maimed for the alleged offenses of his mother. That's a horrible person and an unworthy father.

I think it comes down to your portrayal of love. Admittedly, love is flawed. However, the cornerstones of the sentiment are generally agreed upon: self effacing, enduring, illogical, hopeful, and independent. When you love someone, you see the best in them, even when all the evidence is too the contrary. You go down believing. They needn't love you back because love is selfless. Draco... when he was told she was leaving him, should not strive to torture and murder her. Even if he wanted to, his love would not allow it. Rather more likely, he'd want nothing to do with her at all.

In the case of Hermione, I think you proved how love can overlook all faults. But, she's got a son to think of, and truthfully, a woman in love can forgive nearly anything, but hurting her baby. No way. A mother's love trumps a lover everyday of the week.

So... the ending sort punctured the third wall in really bad way. Everything they had going was just ruined... I didn't like who they became. Sad, though, the beginning was rather good.