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Jimm
2009-07-24 . chapter 19
Nifty story. Looks like you've put a lot of thought into combining lots of different magical-girl ideas. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Kingdark
2009-06-19 . chapter 19
I am looking forward for the next update. Is this a crossover, if so what have you crossed it with aside from Ranma?
Firehedgehog
2009-01-29 . chapter 19
soo continue\this is hilarious
KaFae
2009-01-09 . chapter 19
I quite like this story. It has a unique and fun story line with some of my favorite characters. Keep it up!
DeltaKyuubi
2008-08-11 . chapter 19
cool story cant wait till you update
IvanAlive
2008-07-08 . chapter 19
You have really erratic updates.
angel61991
2008-06-30 . chapter 19
interesting please update soon.
Aceina
2008-06-04 . chapter 1
ranma with out the girl curse is not ranma this fic idea is lame do to that fact
avis de rapina
2008-05-30 . chapter 19
I'm glad to see that you're back to writing again.

Good work over all, but longer chapters would be nicer. The understated comedy is also refreshing.

Any chance of updating "Complementing Opposites"?
Golden Arms
2008-05-25 . chapter 19
While I love the concept, there's just too much stuff in the way. The major issue I have with the story is the lack of continuation implied in the tale; for the most part, this feels like a story that'll need at least a hundred more chapters before the storyline is concluded, and it's not likely to go so far before either getting skiffed to unfinished land, or being rushed through and not have a very satisfying ending.

If the story wasn't so wacky in the sheer amount of tentacle jones, or at least moved much faster than say one fight over the course of several chapters, then it'd be a lot more interesting. I have a hard time staying with it because of not-that-cool tidbits that litter the story. Personally, I'd rather the story breakdown into smaller battles raging across Nerima than opposed to one massive what-the-hell-is-that-about tentacle rapefest-in-waiting, at least this early in the story. Yes, it does, in fact, feel early to me.
Xoroth
2008-05-21 . chapter 19
Another interesting chapter.
phoenix.ru
2008-05-21 . chapter 19
Superb! That was fun!!
Hope you can keep 'em coming!
pesterfield
2008-05-20 . chapter 8
From Ch8:
watched her younger receive a stop sign P: younger sister
Burning Frost
2008-05-20 . chapter 19
BEST MAGICAL GIRL FIC EVER!! I have never in my life had such fun reading a magical girl fic, like I've had reading this. Sure some characters are more or less out of character, but so far I have yet to see anything worth pointing out as a mistake. Your action scenes are excellent and this is indeed very humorous, and sooner or later I'm going to send you the hospital bill for splitting my side. Anyway keep up the great work. Oh and might I make a suggestion? Please make your chapters just a little bit longer. Please?

Keep writing.
Quathis
2008-05-20 . chapter 19
Cool battle and funny lines. Good stuff.
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