 Jimm 2009-07-24 . chapter 19Nifty story. Looks like you've put a lot of thought into combining lots of different magical-girl ideas. Thanks for sharing this with us. |
 Kingdark 2009-06-19 . chapter 19I am looking forward for the next update. Is this a crossover, if so what have you crossed it with aside from Ranma? |
 Firehedgehog 2009-01-29 . chapter 19soo continue\this is hilarious |
 KaFae 2009-01-09 . chapter 19I quite like this story. It has a unique and fun story line with some of my favorite characters. Keep it up! |
 DeltaKyuubi 2008-08-11 . chapter 19cool story cant wait till you update |
 IvanAlive 2008-07-08 . chapter 19You have really erratic updates. |
 angel61991 2008-06-30 . chapter 19interesting please update soon. |
 Aceina 2008-06-04 . chapter 1ranma with out the girl curse is not ranma this fic idea is lame do to that fact |
 avis de rapina 2008-05-30 . chapter 19I'm glad to see that you're back to writing again.
Good work over all, but longer chapters would be nicer. The understated comedy is also refreshing.
Any chance of updating "Complementing Opposites"? |
 Golden Arms 2008-05-25 . chapter 19While I love the concept, there's just too much stuff in the way. The major issue I have with the story is the lack of continuation implied in the tale; for the most part, this feels like a story that'll need at least a hundred more chapters before the storyline is concluded, and it's not likely to go so far before either getting skiffed to unfinished land, or being rushed through and not have a very satisfying ending.
If the story wasn't so wacky in the sheer amount of tentacle jones, or at least moved much faster than say one fight over the course of several chapters, then it'd be a lot more interesting. I have a hard time staying with it because of not-that-cool tidbits that litter the story. Personally, I'd rather the story breakdown into smaller battles raging across Nerima than opposed to one massive what-the-hell-is-that-about tentacle rapefest-in-waiting, at least this early in the story. Yes, it does, in fact, feel early to me. |
 Xoroth 2008-05-21 . chapter 19Another interesting chapter. |
 phoenix.ru 2008-05-21 . chapter 19Superb! That was fun!!
Hope you can keep 'em coming! |
 pesterfield 2008-05-20 . chapter 8 From Ch8:
watched her younger receive a stop sign P: younger sister |
 Burning Frost 2008-05-20 . chapter 19BEST MAGICAL GIRL FIC EVER!! I have never in my life had such fun reading a magical girl fic, like I've had reading this. Sure some characters are more or less out of character, but so far I have yet to see anything worth pointing out as a mistake. Your action scenes are excellent and this is indeed very humorous, and sooner or later I'm going to send you the hospital bill for splitting my side. Anyway keep up the great work. Oh and might I make a suggestion? Please make your chapters just a little bit longer. Please?
Keep writing. |
 Quathis 2008-05-20 . chapter 19Cool battle and funny lines. Good stuff. |