Ah, Severus Snape being reluctantly nice. And heroic, too.

hm...

a little sweet, a little edgy, a little sev, a little remus...

what's not to love?

yay for remus and sevrus slash! must go find more...

Beautiful fic! I like the story which begins with some classical poetry...and I also like the idea that even a soldier has to have somewhere to call home.um cool! I Agree that Sev's home is Remus and vice versa, as now that those two are the left of all...

I will very much appreciate if you write another fic of Sev and Re. Thank you very much for giving me the opportunity of reading such a lovely fic!

Dark and fluffy. I like it.

Fluffy maybe but also with a dash of darkness/angst/drama. Nice writing. I like the first person narration in this. And Remus sounds downright different. The Severus in this story is characterized very well. I don't know how to describe the feeling but this story shows how imperfect and perfect the world is; the contradictions and stuff. Anyway, great job.

It's not fair. No-one should be allowed to write fluffy slash in this way, especially since this seems to be one of your first forays into HP slash! This was... real, is the best word I can come up with. The characterisations are good: complex and exploring their personalities outside of the books, but not too much so that they seem much changed. And the banter, as always, is spectacular, rather dryly funny, and the narrative has a powerful undercurrent of angst. I'll go away now before spluttering any more incoherent dribble... Smiles to you, -C

I don't normally read HP fics, but I was looking through your account when I spotted this... and now I'm glad I did! It's great, actually BELIEVABLE slash for once. Go sam .

Oh.. That's beautiful. *nods, smiling* Very beautiful really.

Fluffy? Yes. Fun? That as well.

You have handled the characters well. The double-spacing without markers between paragraphs makes it hard to read, but it's worth reading.

Characters spot on, as usual. You're an annoyingly good writer, you know that?

You've been bitten by thw slash bug haven't you sam? First VImes and Verinari, now Snape and Lupin...where will you go next? We shall have to wait and see...

The annoying thing is though, you're so damn *good* at it...

*dreamkin

Aw, actually believable slash. Thanks, Sam, this is really cool.

"Now, I often think, Home is Remus Lupin."

And I think, for him, it might be wherever I am."

Ahw – that's so cute! Snape and Lupin are very well done. The dialogues are great!

And of course I love the way you characterise Snape – "You always help, Severus," he said. I stood over him, looking down in amazement. "Why do you always help?"

All the best from Mi