gonna read but not right now

Um... what can i say, even though u have finished this story a very long time ago, i must say, i cried.. it was such a inspiring story, i feel like doing something very good now...* runs downstairs grabs some icecream* yep... thats hist the spot! Newayz, i really di enjoy ir story, i crying right now, becuase of the ending.

*wipes away tear* that was so beutiful *sniff* you should write a sequel. one about their kids and something... i almost cried at the part when she was saying goodbye to all of them. literally. ahywho... great story! me love

*tear*

What a wonderful story! I loved every bit of it...*much love* I think you did great working with the POVs of the characters and really portrayed their emotions well! _ Kutos!

*standing ovation* I am in awe of your talent *wipes the tears streaming down her face* That story was SO amazing! You have an awesome and very well developed talent in your writing. I hope to read many more stories from you in the future! I am somewhat wanting to read the story of Megahna...yet not wanting to. She's so evil, I just hated her the entire time through the story. I am, however, intrigued as to how she softens up in the future, so you can most likely count on me as a reviewer. Thanks so much for your story, it touched my heart deeply. And now, I'll say goodbye, considering 1)You are probably tired of my rambling, and 2)It's 5:30am on Christmas morning. MERRY CHRISTMAS! And me getting to complete this story, was a wonderful gift, so I thank you. Continue writing, don't ever stop...

Videl621

I will be back to continue reading! Excellent so far!

SO loving this, but for now I need to sleep since it is 430am...goodnight, and thanks for being such an AWESOME writer!

Videl621

this story interests me...i will have to finish reading later though.

Definitely not a Mary Jane story. As a matter of fact, it was so wonderful that I do not know what to say. I loved it. It have be laughing, on the edge of my seat, and trying not to cry. Commendable job. I hope that you forever keep writing. You are a wonderful author, and do not let anyone tell you otherwise.

I loved it! What a great original story! I appreciate authors who write fanfiction well. It is hard to do! It was a amazing romance/adventure, and it is going in my favorites!

Okay, I know I already reviewed, but I'm trying to make more sense of it this time, and I thought you might want to know that you posted chapter 3 as chapter 4, and vice versa. So if you read this straight through, you're reading, in order, chapters 1, 2, 4, 3, 5. So THAT'S why I was so confused... You might want to fix that.

Girl, you need to come up with a less sappy way to end your stories. It works fine, but...

Your situation with fics sounds like one of my friends. Anything can set her off. She was watching Space Balls and spontaniously came up with the idea for a CCS fic based on Space Balls but nothing like Space Balls. I'm not sure if she'll ever actually finish anything...

*Is laughing at stupid people and trying not to hurt author* I do wish you'd have let her live in Sengoku Jidai, though. More fun stuff happens there. Ah, me and my obsession with sword fighting.

You know, Kei probably could live 500 years. If you count the fifty on the tree, when Kagome fell down the well, Inuyasha was 200. I'm not kidding. I found out two days ago by friend-who-has-seen-half-the-third-movie. But I'm guessing you didn't know that. Another guess: that scroll was in Italian.

If the next chapter wasn't up, you really would need to hide. BTW, my sister broke the #1 commandment for fanfic authors. She killed not only the main character, but every frikkin' character in her Inuyasha fic 'The End!' I'm still about ready to kill her for that...

Lat me guess about the price: either Francesca is going to permanently lose her empathy or have to stay in feudal Japan permanently. Or both. I wasn't counting questions.