awesome story! loved it!

*Happy Dance* I've finally found a mystery story that I actually liked! It was great. I can't wait to read your other stories. In fact, I'm off to do that right now.

Wow. You created a really great mystery here. I initially ignored this story but somehow came back to it. I'm happy I did. It was definitely different from most Literati's. Thanks for sharing it.

really good.

I have yet to read your second Fan-Fic in this series, but so far I have thoroughly enjoyed myself...it's 2:18am and I've been fighting sleep so I can finish your story..well-worth read!Good job!

La lala la la la lala I-I-I-I-I-I'm happy,(think deck the halls rhythym, cuz I am!)

Okay, I'll quit, be glad this is typing, because I can't sing at all!:) But that's okay!

Anyway, I love you! I love this! I love it all! And now I'm even totally at peace with Jess not being the father! *sighs* Sweet, uh, darn, I can't remember the cliche I was going to use! Oh well! The point of it was I'm very happy with you! You've made me a happy person! You rock! The story rocks! And all that jazz!

Now, I finally get to do what I wanted to do from the beginning, waay back when, read the sequel!

Wahoo! Yay! Woohoo! Yippee!Okay, i'm leaving *ignoring your sigh of relief* BUT, I'll be back in the sequel! Muahahahaha!

You...you...you are awesome!

Very awesome!

ExtREEMEly awesome!

I don't know how you're so awesome!

I'm serious! *nods solemnly* And that's very rare for me. Me...serious...today? I'd laugh if I weren't so happy! Wait, that didn't make any sense eitrher,! Oh well, nothing I say makes since! It's one of the only constant things in my life!:)

Yay!

I love you!

I do, I do, I do! You're so great! You're majorly great! You've made me a happy person! And all of this on sunday night when Tisket-a-Tasket is going to ge on! God, I am so lucky!

THsy kissed ! They're happy! I'm happy! You rock!

There, I think I've covered all bases!:)

Yeah, you're right about the Christopher thing! :) Amen, sister friend! Yeah, the saddest part is..this is NOT me being hyper, this is me being me! See, told you it was scary!

Hey! I get hyper as the night wears on, TOO! So if you ever get an EXTREMELY-OVER-THE-TOP-WAY-TOO-HYPER-FOR-EVEN-ME review from me, it's probably REALLY late!

Oh yeah, I'm ALWAYS making up words that don't exist! Small technicality, big deal! What's lack of existence wjhen we can come up with our own cool words? No need to worry ourselves with these minuscule little things!:)

Oh, p.s. I'm going to check out your blurty right now!

You think YOU'RE cheezy? I LOVE Letters to Cleo, too! What a (hm, work with me, I don't know how you'd spell the mock way of saying coincidence)coinkydink!

Don't worry, I'm Queen Cheese, ask anyone, stupid stuff, fluff (gotta love that), the occasional pop music band/singer, stupid chick flick movies,etc. anything cheesy has automatic appeal to me!:)

My personality, I dunno, not so much cheesy as quirky/crazy/insane/surprisingly-not-a-people-pers on/just-plain-nutball, but other than the nut thing, cheese!

OOh-ooh, I loo-oove romance! I streaa words too much, don't I! Ya-ay Ya-ay!

I'm a happy camper, hey, you know wht I just realized, I lost my pout from Jess' lack of daddyness! Bummer, okay, maybe my pout's loosing steam!

BUT, I don't care, cuz it's still heading in Jess and Rory dirction! So, all's fair in love in war!

Sorry, I have my head stuck in cliche's at the moment!:)

*Whimpering* I'm still utterly depressed that Jess isn'ty the daddy!

Yes, I'm talented, I can hold a put longer than any living creature! *nods proudly* just ask my step-dad! HE'll attest to that!

Rory and Jess on the tun- well, until she has to go alone! But whatever!:)

Uh! No fair! Life sucks!

Wouldn't it have been much cheaper to just sleep with someone! (i'm nice, arent I)

Jess isn't the father, granted, the hatcher of the plan, but still, *sighs* not the father.

Ok, as promised, I'm depressed now! I'm sad, I'm depressed, I'm the most unfortunate person on the planet! Okay, that's not true, but I can be a drama queen, a crazy one, but still!

I'm sad! Oh, I said that *shrugs* oh well, Jess isn't the father so as your punishment you have to listen to me ramble and sulk! :)lol:) Aren't you glad! Ok, I'll leave you alone...for now...

You've got to quit saying Jess is not the father! It's starting to drive me nuts! I'm going ballistic!

He is the father, he is, he is, he is, he is, cause if he isn't I'll go- or, stay crazy!:)

Hahaha, I loved this line,

“We’re sorry. The person you are trying to reach is out of range. Please hang up and try again later,” the most annoying male voice in the world grated in her ear. Wait, it wasn’t Tristan. The second most annoying male voice in the world.

Hehe, a fellow not-liker-of-Tristin *sighs* good to know!

“I think Mark’s tapped your phone,” she said to Jess.

Hmm, Mark's a powerful son of a gun (I'm trying to be nice, believe me, more vulgar words came to mind) isn't he?

OOh, Tristin's voice at the gate! Wow, you SHOULD write movies! I'm serious, this is just like one of those -hey! I just figured out why I love this so much- movies where the main character's on the run from someone and they always seem to know where they are, and what they're doing, and you can't trust anyone! I love those movies!

“This whole town seems all weird.”

Have you ever seen the Truman Show, cuz that's what this is reminding me of! I want to watch that movie now! *pouts* I don't have it! I need to watch it!

This story is fun fun fun!

You know what? You're cool.

I'm serious, you're very cool! I on't know why this isn't bugging me to no end because of the suspense, but it's not! I think it's because it'a already finished! I love reading finished stories!

And what is going on here?

Why does Jess think Rory's a spy, and even more imprtantly, why would Mark want he to spy on him?

Color me confused (then pretend I didn't just say that!) But I love this story, it's very, what's the word, alluring! That works!

Hey, if I don't scare you, there's no way you could possibly scare me!:) And if I do scare you...I'm sure you're not the only one!:)

OOh, long a/ns are scary, yeah, then I definitely have a scare factor!

Hey, I like The Bourne Identity! Yes, mystery galore! I love mystery! *laughing* that makes no sense whatsoever because I can barely handle suspense!

Oh well, *shrugs* I'm just a walking contradiction!

You don't know if he's the dad, but I thought she said he was the dad...now you've confused me! I swear, I can't do suspense!:)

I hope he's the dada, he has to be the dad, do you know how depressed I will be if he's not the dad!

Hehe, okay, off to read more!