What happened? Why on earth would you stop writing this story?? for five years!?? I hope you didn't die.

Actually James is a seeker, remember in the first movie how harry saw the medal that said james potter seeker? and in some of the memories harry saw it was with james throwing the snitch up and catching it.
I really really love this story! keep writing

I like it so far. Nice to see Sirius's cool side. I was going to point out your mistakes, but I guess if you don't want to change them, there's nothing I can do about it. I like your writing style, and you have only minor mechanical errors, none that are in any way atrocious (like spelling definitely as defiantialy. As soon as I see that constantly, I'm outta there. :)
Great job so far, I can't wait to see more. I like how you made Lily bad at astronomy and divination; I've never seen that before. Great job!
God bless,
bookwurm23

Love it! Update soon! Like, complete it at least, will ya?

Indeed, i thought that James POtter was a seeker... o__o

great chapter! please update soon!

please update soon! 2 years? seriously! i m gonna die of grief that u haven't updated! do u really want that on your conscience?

I felt like I read this numerous times in the past...

I really like how you perfectly fit JK's description of James/Lily and Lily's fight with Snape perfectly into the plot. It's a very original fic, and I hope you update soon.

aren't they in fifth year
and isn't pollyjuice potion illegal?

yay! first kiss! i don't really care how lily's feels about it, because they finally kissed! good job!

i can't wait to read the next chapter! please update soon...i love this fic!

i hate you! how can you never update! yes, i know you have a life outside of fanfiction, but some of us don't. take me for example, i love your story and its been two and a half years! i feel rejected. similar to how james felt when lily turned him down. do all you fans a favor and continue with this brilliant and awe-inspiring story!

i realize it's been years since u last updated but i really would like u to update the story eventually... i really like it would like to read more, so please do update eventually... (that sounded like a cheesy commercial thingy for sponsering wildlife or children but its true)
- Samonella xoxo

I'm afraid I must agree with Violin. About the update thing, I mean. I love this story to bits, but man, have you abandoned it or something? According to the update date, the last time you did anything to this was in 2004!

Eh...if I shall write right from my mind, I have no idea what to write...I could write as summersgirl2526: awesome...or as firewalker32: great...but...they're not me...so I have to think of something...I can write that I have read this story two times now...one time in spring time, and now...And the reason I wanted to read it was because I was a bit to tired of too simple storyes, and I knew this is good...but are you going to update soon? (Sorry about the little complaining, but it has been a long time since last time...)

Violin