Oh good lord. I can just see Ryo getting just as pissed off at the shoot as Rika did in the series. The two of them are far more alike then they admit.

Nice job, this is one of the few rika and ryo stories i like. Everyone else has the characterization of rika and ryo off, but you stayed quite true to their characters. Though from what I remember, Ryo doesn't have a mom but not a big deal, u dont see a father doing what his mom did in the story.

Please continue! I'm veary curious about the rest of the fic.

I didn't know Ryo lived with his mother. SHe wasn't there when he picked up but, I guess she could've been somewhere unreaching or something. Anyway I had an odd thought that if there was a Ryuki out there somewhere that I could enjoy, you'd be the one to write it. Yep, I was right. Nice job.

great fic, tho the thought of ryo bein a model scares me...n e ways, i hope u continue...

i read youre storie, and i think it was great! i really hope you continue with it, it's really interesting, even though i've watched most of the digimon series with takato in it, and i dont remember a ryou or ruki, but thats ok with me... but i think you should continue this storie. Ok? ok. but thats just my opinion... and my opinion doesn't really count all that much, but there it is... so, ya... bye bye for now!

really great fic! it would be cool if u could make a sequel where they get together! RYUKI FOREVER!

ROFL! I generaly dislike Ryou (mostly because of his characterization in the wonderswan games *shudder*), but this was FUNNY! (and yes i'm the same irritating git from Darkscribes)

Original, funny, and a definate eye-opener. I think it's too bad that more people do not view Ryo and Rika as friends, it makes for a very amusing story. Keep writing!

If you want feed back here is a pointer do something evil... and you might want to update if you get good reviews.

This is the first time I ever I get interested in any Ryuki fic! So don't you dare say it's bad! Hah!

I would love much to hear more but first let me applaud your skillful writing ability and the originality of this storyline. It's incredible! My eyes were beaming from line to line, from paragraph to paragraph. .

Just give me a short a notice when you're donw with the second chap, okay? In the meantime I'll just stuck with my boring school homeworks and deteriorating marks...Sigh.

LOL! THis is good- just what I've been looking for, a *freindship* fic, though I'm all for Ryou/Ruki!

Awesome story, as usual. (smiles)

BlackTerriermon: Ryou in a photoshoot...(lol)

(laughs) Yeah, I'll agree with you there on that one. Keep up the good work, like you always do.

BlackTerriermon: Don't forget to Moumantai!

It might be interesting to see more on this. Anything that doesn't have Ruki as the stereotypical slut/housewife/model is one step ahead of the rest, in my book. Especially something that turns the table like this does. Ryou could make a really good model, he is kind of cute, but I don't know if he has that kind of patience. Then again, I'm by no means a Ryou expert. I did find one spelling flaw. " I’m more worried about the girls that see the add" In this context, that should be "ad" because it's short for advertisement.

Overall, it's good, it's just a little short. There's more conversation than anything else, but that's to be expected at the moment. If it's continued, plot, pleasse? :)

SQUEE! How cute! That is a very original plot, I must say. Great start. Can't wait for more!