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| MegaKiraraLover 2007-08-28 ch 1,  | abusehm...victor valentine...vincent valentine...victor...vincent...don't cha think they'd make the connection? unless you didn't know about that. then you wouldn't have played ffvii, ne? have you? if you have, then i'm willing to bet that victor is either vincent or vincent's son. maybe even nephew, but i'm still going with the first two. more specifically, the first. vincent "victor" valentine. hm... Anypie, update soon! -MKL |
| twilight101 2007-02-08 ch 1, | abusethis is an awsome story! update soon! |
| Tolea-String-PurpleChoco-Ma... 2006-05-23 ch 1, | abuseHm...are you even gonna continue this one?seems like gold to me.Why dont you see what people think of it?Its a nice idea.Anyway,if you do continue it,try putting pretty different worlds out there.Such as,maybe Inuyasha,Trigun,or hellsing would be good choices.But,if your keeping it kid,go with card captor sakura,pokemon,and other such "childish games& animes".Its just some suggestions.Anyway,keep up the good work!Im rooting for ya Vin! -Tolea |
| Aros-Everheart 2006-01-03 ch 1, | abuseI love this fic. Any chance that you'll continue it. Cause it would be great to see what happends. |
| Aimed mischief 2005-07-21 ch 4, | abuseWow, this is really cool, I like it! I really hope you'll update soon, coz I can hardly wait for more! |
| Aqua Spirit & Wing Weaver 2003-06-20 ch 4, anon. | abuseWRITE MORE NOW! |
| Ari Powwel 2003-06-20 ch 3, | abuseMk, I just finished! You've got a really good story going, but one question . . . _-*'Both of you take cover,' he ordered as he picked up a large stick.*-_ Who? I think it was Riku, but I'm not quite sure. _-*'That would be me,' a man with short blonde hair, a white shirt, and blue jeans said as he turned around in his swivel chair at the pilot seat.*-_ Later on you say he's Cid, but you never introduced him. I'd add a line at the end of yours, like 'I'm Cid, and I fly this bird,' or something like that ^__^ I can't wait to read the next part!! ^_^ Do you have a beta? If you don't, can I?? *pleading look* *thinks of perks* heeheehee . . . Ah well, can't wait!! Ari |
| Ari Powwel 2003-06-19 ch 4, | abuse^_^; I want to read this . . . but the HUMONGUS paragraphs scare me . . . and I'd get lost in them . . . from what I saw, it seems great, but The Most Valuable Rule: Every time a new character speaks, you go to a new line/paragraph. I'm gonna paste this into Word and do that, read it, and I'll give you my REAL review when I finish!! ^__^ Ari Typer of the Guide |
| souldemon1 2003-06-18 ch 3, | abusethis is good and intersting, but as i said before you should start a new paragraph and all of that good stuff, it makes it easier to read ps- that was not a reveiw i would like one that talks about my story |
| YokoandKurasgirl 2003-05-30 ch 1, | abuseSora's kiddnaped in this? |
| souldemon1 2003-05-30 ch 1, | abuseThis kind of interesting needs some more also desricbe the characters the stroy is interresting but who tim? |