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lordofthepies
2005-02-19 . chapter 1
Veggie finally got to go SSJ3!
Whoo, I'm finally getting around to reviewing these, because they sure as hell deserve it!
I have to say they are a fantastic trio of lemons, and if you where inclined, you should do more. However, if you don't think you'd be able to, thats fine. Keep it while the goings good.

Also, on your little problem with , I suggest you could post on adultfanfiction . net, (very good site) mediaminer . org or saiyanhideaway . us (smaller, they are DBZ only) (the spaces should prevent FF blocking them ^_^) Sorry if you already knew thoose by the way *sweatdrops* Just in case.
Queen Diamond Serenity
2004-03-06 . chapter 1
I Really Really Likr Your Stories.
Please Write A another One 4 Me ^_^
I'd Be The Most Happest Goddess ~N~ The Whole
Wide World.
silverrowan
2004-02-26 . chapter 1
Hmm...
Sil
donnie
2003-11-19 . chapter 1
i love true desire ive read all three i think they are all awsome and the detail you put in them i love it you know how to wright a novel if you wanted but i love these
SpazChan395
2003-10-18 . chapter 1
A! You can't end the series! I love it so! COOL! Veggie reached SSJ3! Am I right? Who ever thought that screwing his mate would turn him SSJ3! Sad that it hurt Kaky so much in the beginning though. O! I LOVE this fic! ^_^ I wish you would write more!
Yami no Kawaii Ouji
2003-10-03 . chapter 1
awe, so cute!
great story! i always thought Goku would make the perfect uke.
LyjinLeejin
2003-08-13 . chapter 1
You have got to write more! This is definitley one of the best series of lemons I have ever read!! PRETTY PLEASE WRITE MORE!

-Lyjin
FIREamrm
2003-07-25 . chapter 1
You have got ot do another one of these!!
They are so cool When I start readin g one I'm in a transe and can't stop til' the end.
You are an amazing writer. I'm writing a DBZ fic right now and I can only hope that my lemon comes out as good as your, but I dout it will.
PLEASE right another in this serise PLEASE!
kate
2003-06-22 . chapter 1
good fics! Please update soon! Write new fics soon! Write more fics soon!
BatmansLady1369
2003-06-15 . chapter 1
very nice. well written, well formatted, and good god are you skilled in the art of describing things! i need you to teach me how to do that. great write, keep it up. i'll be watching for other stuff by you. ^_^
Anonymous72
2003-06-08 . chapter 1
I have to say you write some of the best smut,lemons whatever you want to call it that I have read..I hope you continue soon..with more fanfics
Fivi
2003-06-01 . chapter 1
it was great.. just... i wish that Goku was the lead instead of Veggie
Kenshin-gotenks
2003-05-31 . chapter 1
oh, good! good! i liked it, very descriptive!
kate
2003-05-30 . chapter 1
good fic! Please write more soon!
karena
2003-05-30 . chapter 1
don't torture yourself! if you don't want to write anymore of this time sequence, don't. But, don't stop writing! I'd love to see what else you can come up with! This series of stories is wonderful but don't torture yourself or us, for that matter. You can tell when a writer has had enough or not.
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