I have find this story interesting. One bit of advic, do not use "shorthand" in your story. If you want to use the word "without" use that word and not w/o.

WOW, excellent chapter! How ironic that Quentin should have to depend on his brother Carl for help! Looking forward to the next chapter! :)

I am really enjoying this far improved retelling of the Q/Amanda in hell storyline. Ick! I like the details you add in, like a girl would not have gotten the same education as a boy. Keep posting here! :)

I Can't wait to find out what happens! It's very good so far!


Linda.