this is a really good fic!
It took me a while to read :)
I can't wait 4 more chapters

great story cant wait for next chapter keep it p

That was sad. Realistic, but sad. Hope they make up soon.

Wow, I haven't had time to read this for ages & I've missed all this excitement! Tell me what happens next - SOON!

Hey, this is great! Please keep going! I want to see if Kane can get away from his mean brother and I wonder where Kirsty is?! :(
Gripping! Please continue, was glued to my screen!
Laura
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Wow! Your story is so gripping! It's fantastic!

Thanks for a great story - please continue soon!

Caz :-)

PS - Hope Kane and Kirsty are ok! :-S

Oh, wow, that was a nice long chapter! you write brilliantly.

your story is awsome
please keep writing
i love it

WOW! This is such a strong story. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Poor Kane! And let's hope Kirsty's ok too! Also, I kinda feel a bit sorry for the Dennis guy!

Thanks for a great story - please continue soon!

Caz :-)

Gripping stuff, Claire, I wish I could write half as well. I felt quite sorry for Dennis in the end.

Uh-oh! This Dennis Marshall sounds like a bit of a shifty character - let's hope Kane and Kirst are ok!

Excellent story - keep up the good work, and please continue soon!

Thanks!

Caz :-)

I never know what's going to happen next in your stories! They're really good reading and well written too :o)

hey i LOVE ur story it's great i can't wait 2 c what happened 2 kirsty. Hope she's ok. Please update soon.

Hey, Claire, cool story! :o) Have to wait ages for updates! :o(

Hey Claire! Thanks for updating this fanfic, it's one of my favourites! I hope Kirsty is OK! It's still got me gripped, please continue soon!

Caz :-)