very funny especially when you described Marco's room haha shocking pink! hahaha =D thats funny

very funny. when I started it I actually thought it was gonna be serious. When I got to the part where craig said "But I promised my friends a special trip to the movies and then a full day at the arcade! I can’t believe you" i thought it was weird. when I got to the part where he robs marco's house the wording and events seemed supsicous, but what opened my eyes to the intent of the story (to make you laugh, not to be serious) was when moses appeared to Craig (okay seems like you've been using way too many hyperboles) Job well done!

ha ha ha ha ha ha. tis very funny.

LOL...this reminds me of a joke I once heard. "jesus is watching you". Your story was laid out exactly (well, except for the Degrassi connection) the same way.

I don't normally go for Craig fics, basically because most of them have the same plot-line. But, I liked this one. It had it's dramatic points and it had a cool twist of humor towards it, also. I like that.

It's was just--Good. But not all 1st chapter come off as, "OMG!! I LOVE THAT CHAPTER SOO MUCH! IT WAS THE BEST!" as some people might put it.
But it was good. I'll be waiting for chapter two.

well, good try is all I guess I can say. the fic, in my opinion, jumped around quite a bit. plus I didn't realize you were trying to be humorous until half-way through the fic. were you? but like I said before, it was a nice attepmt at a good plot line, but ahh, yeah. It was only a little bit too odd for me liking.

Since when does DCS have school on Saturdays? lol!You said they were at school and the next day was Sunday?

* Prebea does an impression of American Idol's Randy Jackson

"I don't know dude, I wasn't feeling it, dog."

Really, I wasn't.