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Taylor 2004-09-28 ch 3, anon.	abuseNick and Sara should be together because, The are a bout the same age and they understand each other. Sara and Gil should not be together because they are both work to much and they would never see each other.
Taylor 2004-09-28 ch 4, anon.	abuseNick and Sara all the way baby!
Dizzy-1500 2004-07-27 ch 4,	abuseFINISH SARA AND NICK ALL DA WAY grissom is far far far too old for sarah f**k he could be he father her and nick are so much more suited and a cuter couple
EmilyTheSilentAssassin 2004-07-23 ch 4,	abuseThis should be a Nick Sara because Nick and Sara have a friendship and a sexual attraction rather than just a mental attraction.
Nikita1506 2004-06-14 ch 4,	abuseyes, N/S do belong together...but other than that, Grissom isnt really the type to notice something other than bugs...he's not really a people person...and w/ Sara? well, he totally screwed that up! Also, taking a quote from another N/S fic, "Grissom wouldnt notice me unless i was dancing naked on top of his desk with spiders in my hair...even then he would probably only notice the spiders," yes, that was said by our very own Sara to Nick after they talked about how they didnt want 'just a fling'...Nick and Sara belong together more than Grissom and Sara ever would...besides, Nicky is much hotter...:) Keep on writin! ~Kita
SisterBear 2003-07-15 ch 4, anon.	abuseI think you should have Sara end up staying with Grissom. 1. Well because they do look so cute together... But since you want something besides that... 2. Grissom seems to not really care that much about Sara in your story. I know he was getting Cath to talk to Sara and Nick, but if he really loved her, he would have gone after her himself. 3. There are way too many G/S stories already. 4. How about you just have her go after Warrick next... or even Greg! LOL She'd be the ** of CSI! LOL Ok, that was a joke. :-) 5. I still say Nick and Sara rock! They just seem to click way more than Grissom and Sara do. G/S would seem way too much like father/daughter. And ew! OK, enough rambling for just a review! Either way, I do love this story! :-)
Stoked-55 2003-06-30 ch 4,	abuseN/S my reason? because i said so, lol.
Katie 2003-06-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseHey K. Ya know, next time you change ur s/n try NOT TELLING ME WHAT YOU'RE CHANGING IT TO. might help. dork. Anywayz, since I have my internet back now, which I woulda had this whole time if it weren't for u an whats his name, I have said b4 that it should be G/S, cuz u gotta have more Geek Love. :). And you gotta do something that's W/C (yeah yeah but hey, they're my favs.) Do you have a beta yet? Found 4 1/2 things I coulda corrected...exactly. Ya know what Mrs. Shaw said bout me correcting ppl:). And Keanu is MINE! Who cares if ya made him up, he's MINE!
Jessica 2003-06-23 ch 4, anon.	abuseMust be Nick and Sara!! Must be!
jillian 2003-06-21 ch 4, anon.	abusen/s! im a major shipper for them ! keep updating!
:) 2003-06-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseThis is hard, I'm not a N/S (but I just LOVE Nick and the once I love the most are N/Oc), I'm not a G/S too. If I'll choose N/S it will be against what I want, if I choose G/S than Nick will be sad. So I think you should make what happened just a dream that Sara had and that Nick has no love feelings for her and than she can be with Grissom, this idea has another reason, I really don't think Nick will ever do something like that. And Sara is being very wrong-because she's using Nick and that's really not nice!
Lynn 2003-06-20 ch 4, anon.	abuseAwesome story...I like the way you are setting up Sara to have to choose between Nick and Grissom. As to how it should go, I am pretty flexible. I'll go either way if its well written. My personal opinion is split 50/50. I think that G/S would work well in this story if Grissom fought for Sara (hopefully by himself - sending Catherine to do his dirty work isn't as effective). On the other hand, N/S has a lot of potential in the story, if Sara can resolve her relationship with Grissom and develop a relationship with Nick that isn't just based on flirting. My apologies for my lengthy comment... Thanks for writing!
adpi24 2003-06-20 ch 4,	abuseOkay, I loved this chapter. I still vote for Nick and Sara. I do actually have a better reason than they belong together, in a three page essay, that I'll actually just email to you. I'm so pathetic, but I had nothing better to do with my time.
Freebs 2003-06-20 ch 4, anon.	abuseHey, okay, seeing as you've started some mini-debate, I wanted to join! I thin it should be N/S, because as I think you mentioned in passing, Nick is more Sara's age, Grissom's old ebough to be her dad (or at least that's what I think!) Anyways! Great story, eagerly anticipating more! ~Freebs
PeTiTeCaT 2003-06-20 ch 3,	abuseoh yeh, also grissom seems a bit annoyin too (im nice, aren't i?) considering he cant do it himself, having to drag catherine in. the way she's acting (nice to grissom, cold to nick) i reckon catherine shud go with grissom and sara with nick :D

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